DON <VS> spiky2k8
 

aight u kno the rules we already established 10 lines good luck u spit first

yo im gona post my shit tomoro im not in the mood to think of battle lines right now im tired but ill post as soon as possible tomoro pc good luck

rules r
no crew votes
no hater votes
no d/r
and etc....

10 lines max

i spit first

lets goooooooo come on post already u said you are goin first

ok spiky its been a day u were sposed to drop last night illm up the battle case u cant see it quit prewriting and drop

my bad man
aight man
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i hit with both my hands then it makes that tha bitches
like yo momma want to dance/
nigga dont u understand man i'll put u to sleep like tha
got damn sandman/
cause I'll hit u once and then hit u twice I'll have u packn
up yo bag then have u run'n like a pack mice/
i will hit u seven mores times it will be like roll'n dice after
I'll do driveby on u while i'm on my bike/
i will score on u like mike and then leave yo ass syked while
u still holding yo mic/
you think this a game but its i know my rhymes got u pain
and i bet its driving u insane/
it no so good u came i'll sayn the same thing step'n on yo
ass like Yoa Ming/
i cant think anymore cuz i'm fin to close tha door u stupid
hor/
my raps is are weak but urs are weaker that why u keep
sinking deeper and deeper/
after this i'm fin to fuck my 21 year old house keeper so i'm
cutting off my beeper/
its fin to be turn so u can spit yo rhyme and waste my time
wit ur little nursery rhymes/

i'm done son ur turn
good luck man

uppin for votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aight people thanx

nice drop spiky ...u elevatin...get cha bois fo da crew battle aight..and yo..DON is a nice rapper so stay straight wun...

not to be rude or mean but that does sound like notebook posting aight here i go...

this bitch sucks so bad i cant even comprehend you as serious...
has jerkin off in your room so much made your mind go delerious?...
hes neva seen a pussy before so he plays doctor because hes curious...
and when the 6 year old girl next door refuses he becomes furious...
how is it possible your rhymes suck as hard as your mother...
he cant win here so to win at home he rapes his brother...
he dont want nobody to know hes gay so he tries to act black as a cover...
but its blown because i found out his right hand was his most passionate lover...
when my italians beat you and leave you...
youll have a mark left on your face so you can forever remember it was the DON who beat you...

aight lets get some votes no cheatin

[QUOTE=DON]
this bitch sucks so bad i cant even comprehend you as serious...
has jerkin off in your room so much made your mind go delerious?...
hes neva seen a pussy before so he plays doctor because hes curious...
and when the 6 year old girl next door refuses he becomes furious...
QUOTE]

^^^^^funny shit and best bars

aight hands down no beef tho but DON takes this
better opener nice flow structure good funny as hell,nice and more better punches
spiky nice drop but DON takes this his verse was better
overal Vote: DON...

kant vote in poll bcuz wun spiky put me on black listr or someshit but ye DOn u got diz aight wun...

Vote - don
Spikys shit was weak... I aint tryin to hate but seriously say somethin that matters. You did try wit the nursery rhyme part.

Don- this was clearly an easy battle for you. Good flow good punch lines. Get it Got it Good...

Ay can 1 of ya'll drop in honest vote in my battle verses yo- yo im tryin to close that shit 2DAY

how can ya'll vote for him all
he did was talk about gays that dumb
as hell this aint right this fuckn
cheatn
all he's doing is calling me gay and talkn
about gay
what tha fuck

how is this hceatin ur verse sucked i had punches u didnt its as simple as that and i got u good so jus shut up and accept it besides ur friends told me to watch out for u cause ur the one who cheats and gets friends to vote for u

ok
DON- had great punches and good vocab. very clever shit. i like tha rhyme bout the 6year old that was good.
Spikey-ok yer flow wasnt good. not good rhymes. no creativity.
hands down ta DON

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