short keystyle need some feedback
 

i'm demanding respect
i'll replace your chest with a gaping hole,
I'm in the ozone ready to spill my soul
goin out of control, i feel like my whole brain's
fallin out my skull,
who you callin insane?
i'll make you dissaper like david blain
like a dog i can smell fear,
Cmon pussy
let me see a tear
go home and cry to your moms,
i'll be waitin in you room holdin a bomb

uppin for feed back

ehh...pretty basic...nothin impressive....sorry but it wasnt good.....2/10.....only thing that u had was flow.....

^^^ i agree it was bad but tha rhythm was good

not to good but i guess it wasnt absolutley horrible either it gets a 4/10.....