manchild (give feedback on this)
 

yeah i did this track with a slight cold so my voice might sound off on it.. tell me what you think about this though

its called manchild

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/mcpat.htm

That was a good deep spit there man. All it needed was possibly some more complex rhyms, like get some more multies up in there, and of course recording quality, bu i dont give a fuck abotu that. It was hot man, keep that shit up, nice.

dat was seriously deep man. i liked it. keep it up man.

thanks alot man..

Yo man, mad potential fo real. Liked the written, audio was wack, i could help you out with that a bit. I got this instro too man, its dope. Hook was good, but layering your vocals hurt quality already. Holla at me and i'll see if i can help you out.

aim: vendettaishere
msn: only1protege@hotmail.com

ay yo shit sounds good yo your sound quality is nice .........yo peep my shit and lemme know if ya can gimme some ideas..... pointaz......help recordin someshit ......holla