t-storm vs flowintelligent
 

10-20 linez
no d/r
hate
crew
no unexplained votes
usual rulez
blind spit
verses due 48hrs after battle thread is set up


consider this ma check in......gud luk

Aiight Checkity Check Ill Have My Verse Done Later ~!1!~

yo
 

jus remindin ya^^^^this thread closin at 8 2 nite^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6

AND TO REMIND YOU THIS THREAD CLOSES TODAY AT 1:58 pm but heres my verse


got that hot-heat with the skill to rock-beats ya verses is alot-weak//
yo ass is not-street leave ya obie trice style, wishin you got-teeth//*
im like a king-and-a-lord with words like pins-and-a-sword//
t-storm means overrated so ill make sure he wins-the-award//
like a cell phone on a mountain, i cant be reached-at-my-level//
u pack heat? please...we know you "less-street-than-a-meadow"//**
ur obscening-lines...well they just demeaning-time//
u rough?...3 x 3 is the only time you seen-a-nine//
noone ever heard-of-this-gay-guy, tryin to learn-how-to-spray-lines//
but all hes doing is readin my shit, then rewording-my-same-rhymes//
so like gay contorsonists dont get it twisted faggot or youll get deceased fast//
cuz u couldnt write hot text if u was on fire and typing with a heat rash//

~!1!~ not too hott but i feel a no show

yeh
 

yeh^^^i mean 8 british time...thats bout in3 1/2 hours...
ima drop in about 30 mins

haha
 

aiight here i go........

who the fuck this wannabe-mcee,claiming i dnt belong in elevated?/
i got rap "roots",wit ur background u aint even a "shoot"..i leave u rotivated/

claim u gotta lotta riends on rb..u jus bite their linez..hve em superimposed/
u so "poor" u got 62 "threads"..but still asking cats 2 get em-closed/(im clothes)

u think uz a "playa"..but jus like rollin a "dice" ur name neva cum up "twice" on RB/
jus like "monopoly"..u old kent road..im "mayfair"..u jus aint got tha numbers 2 get wit ME/

see u fight like a "dyke",i hit harder than "iron-mike"..u hit back wit a pillow-fight/
u neva get wit ma sick-spills,..try as u might..only way u gona win is bite a hole-in-ma-mic/

u see i change "faces" to attack from unsuspecting "places"...call me casta-troy/
jus like pearl"harbour",ur "armour" weak,so ima "sneak n ya fleet-destroy/

ma internal rhyme-scheme got u a "shade" of ashamed green...u full of spite n envy/
ur flow aint "intelligent" im tha mouse n u tha "elephant"..u jus lost tha fight of tha century/

got that hot-heat with the skill to rock-beats ya verses is alot-weak//
yo ass is not-street leave ya obie trice style, wishin you got-teeth//*
8...nice opener, gud multi and the obie trice line was funny!!
im like a king-and-a-lord with words like pins-and-a-sword//
t-storm means overrated so ill make sure he wins-the-award//
7...gud vocab and nice multi again!!
like a cell phone on a mountain, i cant be reached-at-my-level//
u pack heat? please...we know you "less-street-than-a-meadow"//**
6...pretty weak, average vocab!!
ur obscening-lines...well they just demeaning-time//
u rough?...3 x 3 is the only time you seen-a-nine//
7...nice line, 2nd part was funny!!
noone ever heard-of-this-gay-guy, tryin to learn-how-to-spray-lines//
but all hes doing is readin my shit, then rewording-my-same-rhymes//
6...second line gud, but the first with the gay part is played!!
so like gay contorsonists dont get it twisted faggot or youll get deceased fast//
cuz u couldnt write hot text if u was on fire and typing with a heat rash//
6...played again with the gay shit, pretty weak closer!!


who the fuck this wannabe-mcee,claiming i dnt belong in elevated?/
i got rap "roots",wit ur background u aint even a "shoot"..i leave u rotivated/
6...nice vocab but not really a strong punch!!
claim u gotta lotta riends on rb..u jus bite their linez..hve em superimposed/
u so "poor" u got 62 "threads"..but still asking cats 2 get em-closed/(im clothes)
7...nice punch, second line pretty funny!!
u think uz a "playa"..but jus like rollin a "dice" ur name neva cum up "twice" on RB/
jus like "monopoly"..u old kent road..im "mayfair"..u jus aint got tha numbers 2 get wit ME/
6...monopoly line is played!!
see u fight like a "dyke",i hit harder than "iron-mike"..u hit back wit a pillow-fight/
u neva get wit ma sick-spills,..try as u might..only way u gona win is bite a hole-in-ma-mic/
7...nice line, gud vocab, gud multi!!
u see i change "faces" to attack from unsuspecting "places"...call me casta-troy/
jus like pearl"harbour",ur "armour" weak,so ima "sneak n ya fleet-destroy/
5...that line was weak man, in parts it was rather choppy!!
ma internal rhyme-scheme got u a "shade" of ashamed green...u full of spite n envy/
ur flow aint "intelligent" im tha mouse n u tha "elephant"..u jus lost tha fight of tha century/
6...aight closer, pretty basic tho!!


POINTS TOTALS

Flow Intelligent - 40/60
T-Storm - 37/60

V/ - Flow Intelligent

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Flow-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really ......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores..Balacance was ok.....Everything was tight like alwayz......
8/10

T Storm-Came kind of weak and alright....Work on something
structure was ok but work on some thing.....Multies was aight but
need more work need more work.....But keep elevatin and work on alot
of things-6/10

I refuse to vote T-Storm you need to elevate in FL.
Flow Damn you`re style of raaping was a bit enoying but you had flow & some punches but it was enoying they way you structure you`re multi`s was very hurrbish i would say your in the same level as K -trin anyway T Storm needs to take out this wacknees " " from showing punches it foooo herbs , yo . .

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holy fuck flow this was one of your hottest shit lmfao this was fuckin sick..the flow on this shit was like..dayum i was feelin that shit mos' def...the got some teeth line was aiight...used a couple times before though but it was str8..the structure was pretty good i was feelin it..lol your suprised me on this one..and SICK opener...hot shit nice

39/50

t-storm nasty structure u culd of dun better...didnt see too many personals...the shit was aiight..flow was bad cuz most shit was pretty much stretched ive seen better from u and i know u culd do better....keep doin u thought fam

25/50

vote; flow