LyRiKaL19 vs T lite
 

15-20 lines
no d/r
no crew
spit by 5 pm tommarro
good luck

Yo T Lite…wats It Be…wat It Aint…so Wats Up Wit Da Fake Paint...
Ure Lookin White…wat U Faint…those Tear Drops Are Fake…
How U Gone Lie…puttin Red And Black Paint In Ure Eyes…
Shows That Ure Weak…like Monday It’s The First Day Of The Weak…
U Still Go Time To Change/just Don’t Steel Ure Sistas Pokect Change/
Cause That’s Wrong…u Cat Is Strange…ghetto Hoe-boy…
Ridin Whorses…one Whip To Whip More…one More Hit And Ure A Bitch Fo Shore...
Sit Bak And Spit No More…i Know Its Lyrikal Galore…i Talk Real So I Know Its Not Fake Folklore…
Its Not A Lie A Fib Or Even A Fable…i Am Independent I Have No Label…cause I Don’t Care…i Am Half And Half…tha Hulk…
Spittin Out Rhymez In Bulk I Crush Any Nigga...
You Think You Big...nigga Im Bigga
Makin Money In Rolls…never Spend Money On A Whore…
Neva Open A Bitched Door…im A Rude Nigga…but Still I Love…

Yea I’m white…..That’s why you can’t see my style //
Your 'elementary' rhymes can’t match mine, you get a 'Grade' A in Denial //

Check it dawg, ain’t really no need to make this a racial issue,
Cuz After I kick your ass, I’ll throw you a Black Tissue // :LOL:

Just for your sake lyriKal, I’ll only go 10 percent //
This ain’t nothin 'new', I’ma make U my victim I 'Recent' // (<<Resent<<)

Gettin' Grimey fo' a minute....Muahhawaahah

This kid can’t flow, so save the Rags & Towels //
Your best chance to blow up is when your shit Dis-Embowels // :LOL:

99 percent of ya raps are worthless or 'CORN'Y,
And I’ll never go on record sayin’ a COUNTRY boy tore me // (Corn...country)

Give it up Buck, I’m ‘young’un but still deadly //
And you’ll soon be forgotten like a chick named Heather Headley // who....….?

You ridin’ in style…naw Short Buses don’t count kid //
Lea-lea-leavin’ you retared & stutterin’ is what T just did // hahahaah......GAME OVER:)


Whack blah somethin' quick.......but still good enuff to win ;);) ....Consider yaself lucky hehe.....

Votes up ya'll ......I'll try and return the favor when I have time.....~1ne~

BTW........I'm a Girl lol.....

t took this....your versus were both good but t came alot harder....lyrikal some of yo lines didnt rhymes, n u got kind of repetitive, and ur punches didnt connect dat much, but keep improvin, dis is ur 1st battle after all....winner t-lite

Uppin ya'll.....


1-0 me ....holla bacc

The Break Down
LyRiKaL19
"Yo T Lite…wats It Be…wat It Aint…so Wats Up Wit Da Fake Paint...
Ure Lookin White…wat U Faint…those Tear Drops Are Fake…"
this is ridiculous..maybe i didnt see a picture, but the structure and punch was weak

"How U Gone Lie…puttin Red And Black Paint In Ure Eyes…
Shows That Ure Weak…like Monday It’s The First Day Of The Weak…"
what does this mean?? Monday isnt even the first day of the week anyway..check yo calendar dawg.

"U Still Go Time To Change/just Don’t Steel Ure Sistas Pokect Change/
Cause That’s Wrong…u Cat Is Strange…ghetto Hoe-boy…"
where is your punch?? who steals their stisters pocket change?..but i do agree, that would be strange*

"Ridin Whorses…one Whip To Whip More…one More Hit And Ure A Bitch Fo Shore...
Sit Bak And Spit No More…i Know Its Lyrikal Galore…i Talk Real So I Know Its Not Fake Folklore…"
this is prolly your best punch, but your not really shittin on his game.

"Its Not A Lie A Fib Or Even A Fable…i Am Independent I Have No Label…cause I Don’t Care…i Am Half And Half…tha Hulk…
yeah, i get that the Hulk has like two sides, but the only thing Half and Half reminds me of is milk, and i think you dawg are milkin yo punches..step it up

"Spittin Out Rhymez In Bulk I Crush Any Nigga...
You Think You Big...nigga Im Bigga"
i get the point..not very creative though

"Makin Money In Rolls…never Spend Money On A Whore…
Neva Open A Bitched Door…im A Rude Nigga…but Still I Love…"
man i hope you got love, cuz you gotta have a passion bro if you want to elevate yo game..keep workin

T lite
"Check it dawg, ain’t really no need to make this a racial issue,
Cuz After I kick your ass, I’ll throw you a Black Tissue // :LOL:"
this is a decent punch..nothin special, but decent

"Just for your sake lyriKal, I’ll only go 10 percent //
This ain’t nothin 'new', I’ma make U my victim I 'Recent' // (<<Resent<<)"
this is not good..dont try to make words become other words that mean entirely different things...i see what your trying to accomplish though

"Gettin' Grimey fo' a minute....Muahhawaahah"
hmm...wierd

"This kid can’t flow, so save the Rags & Towels //
Your best chance to blow up is when your shit Dis-Embowels // :LOL:"
this is yo best punch..got the humor in it too..good job

"99 percent of ya raps are worthless or 'CORN'Y,
And I’ll never go on record sayin’ a COUNTRY boy tore me // (Corn...country)"
i like this..i get the connection between corn and country, but its irrelevant for the purpose of the punch..what you did was simply make an observation.

"Give it up Buck, I’m ‘young’un but still deadly //
And you’ll soon be forgotten like a chick named Heather Headley // who....….?"
well, if Heather Headley was actually a well known person that people forgot about, than this is good..if not, this is bad..i'll give you the benefit of the doubt..nice work.

"You ridin’ in style…naw Short Buses don’t count kid //
Lea-lea-leavin’ you retared & stutterin’ is what T just did // hahahaah......GAME OVER"
good punch..i like the short bus line..i used that idea in one of my battles one time too, it can never get old..nice work

i would say this wasnt very even..not that i know everything, but i think you both can elevate..
vote: T lite

Thanx man....appreciate it... 2-0 uppin



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yea this battle was cool both verses was aight but i was feelin t Lite though her verse had better punches flow and structure was better...lyrikal u need to elevate and stuff trust you'll get better vote = T lite

lyric - strucher is week man thats it dude you need to work on that if you expect to get better man period punches ass um word play none you need help man period,

t-lite- you got this one with better punches but your stucher is fucked bad man no one who is smart likes every line discrib to they it takes away from the word play you were creative to come up with man and two lines the space that sux goot work on thaat

v/t-lite just plan better

dont forget to return the favor link is in the sig

Aight 4-0 uppin....someone ain't vote in the poll tho....
holla back ~1~

Flow-tie
Structure-Lite
Punches-Lite
Entertaining-Lite

She got this easy one pure better talent lol but hey good look to the other guy on his other battles *one*

SB

Yo whoeva didn't vote in the poll, could they do that, so this battle will be ove.......thanx ~1~

I think everyone know t lite took this battle just took it....sorry its not a hatin vote...but ti a vote....took the whole battle


T lite