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Nips 05-23-04 05:34 PM

freestyle(feedback please)
 
I drop bombs like Ali drops punches||
Dont think i wont slap ya cuz im popular||
ive got an ak47 so are fool with ya||
catch you slippin im gonna give you all ive got||
you never had cuffs on your wrist||
or blood on your shirt cuz a brother said the wrong shit 2 you||
Nigga you dont know me and i dont know you||
when i spit this shit its crazy||
got a shotgun to put a hole in niggas who try and fool me||
one shot is not enought to break me||
send more shots at your door this means war||
your scared of me but you aint prepared for me||
homie you know that||

J Gutta 05-23-04 05:41 PM

elevate more..and tha ali thing is played out and shit aight..wun..be e.z

Soul Sickness 05-26-04 02:03 PM

it wasnt that good needed some definate elevation but overall not that badd keep elevatin.............


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