Big Nom vrs discharge
 

10 lines
blind spit
spit due 30 mins after checkity in
or u get dqued
no crew
no d//r

discharge Change ya DAmn Signeture Lol 19-1 not 17 lol

oh yea.. ill do dat lol

fuck sigin in cuz i dont no were it is lets jus do this

ok spit your verse now man.. and remember u asked to battle me checkity check

please your waistin my time/
like cocaine i'll finish you off in 1 line/
your like ah rotten floor waiting to fall through/
i'm in ya head now like tylenol gettin to you/
beatin me......who ya think ya playin Soldiers of War permanent
to this site like ah marker cuz we plan on stayin/
you can't beat me so now wat/
you're like old milk..your expiration dates up/
so be ah man, walk away and swallow ya pride/
but if not then heres another punch line.......open wide/

he calls him self soldier of war but i murder his crew im an army of one.....
lyrically throwin gernades, stick a fork in dis soldier he is done......
im a lyrical terrorist, beating this herb and his crew wanna be soldiers.....
his rhymes are boring us we need to wake up to some foldiers..... (cofee brand)
sorry i beat you, but buisness is bisness had to drop the lyrical bomb....
u challenged me and there is reprecussions BIG-NOM.......
ill beat uwith SPLEEN-spliting-ACTION,as i demonstrate rap-satisfaction.....
come out of the closet, dick is your number1 passion.......
try to win a battle, now u and ur "platoon" got a dificult mission.......
u cant win this,i went easy,ur weak rhymes were invisioned

~!D!~

iight you want me to spit another ten lines or wat?

Aiyo Check This..

Big Norm: 4/10
You Trying That New Structure But You Failed At It, No WordPlay Really. Flow Was Alright, But You Lacked Vocab, Metaphors, and Hard Hitting Punches. I Could Care Less ABout Streched Bars As Long As you Get Your Point Across....Just Elevate and Stay Dophe.

Discharge: 6/10
You Had Sum Personals In Your Spit and Sum Hard Hitting Personals....Flow Was Alright but You Had Sum Nice WordPlay and ALright Vocabulary. Just Keep Elevating and Stay Dophe.

*PRops To BoTh*

Vote - Discharge

~R~

Big Norm: I feel that the verse for you wasn't that tight not big
punches at all structure was decent vocab was half-decent flow
was aight....personals little

discharge: well in my opinion dawg you did better in your drop
than Norm did your punches hit a lot harder than Norm's personals
were aight... flow was good, structure was real good

vote goes to: discharge

do a honest vote on my battle: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

Yo discharge got this... heres how i break it..

NOM - You had rhymes.. but some of it was pretty wack, you need to elevate.

This line was horribly stretched..and didnt rhyme with anything

beatin me......who ya think ya playin Soldiers of War permanent
to this site like ah marker cuz we plan on stayin/

Discharge - You had good flow, good punches, good structure, overall you definitely had the better verse.

Overall Discharge took this whole thing home, Nom you need to elevate, you'll be better in the long run..

Vote = Discharge

please your waistin my time/
like cocaine i'll finish you off in 1 line/ weak...
your like ah rotten floor waiting to fall through/
i'm in ya head now like tylenol gettin to you/ nice....
beatin me......who ya think ya playin Soldiers of War permanent
to this site like ah marker cuz we plan on stayin/huh_
you can't beat me so now wat/
you're like old milk..your expiration dates up/dont make much sense
so be ah man, walk away and swallow ya pride/
but if not then heres another punch line.......open wide/ok....

calls him self soldier of war but i murder his crew im an army of one.....
lyrically throwin gernades, stick a fork in dis soldier he is done...... played....
im a lyrical terrorist, beating this herb and his crew wanna be soldiers.....
his rhymes are boring us we need to wake up to some foldiers..... (cofee brand) ok....
sorry i beat you, but buisness is bisness had to drop the lyrical bomb....
u challenged me and there is reprecussions BIG-NOM.......nice
ill beat uwith SPLEEN-spliting-ACTION,as i demonstrate rap-satisfaction.....
come out of the closet, dick is your number1 passion.......ok....
try to win a battle, now u and ur "platoon" got a dificult mission.......
u cant win this,i went easy,ur weak rhymes were invisioned ok....

both were pretty weak verses but i give this to discharge for better vocab, complexity, punchlines. overall, his stuff made more sense but both of you have potential so keep elevating...peace...sry if i made the wrong decision,....but here is what i have...

discharge you killed big nom. nice verse cuz. better punches and lyrics. i like the creativity you put into this joint.better everything, pretty loop sided

best lines:ill beat uwith SPLEEN-spliting-ACTION,as i demonstrate rap-satisfaction.....
come out of the closet, dick is your number1 passion.......

im a lyrical terrorist, beating this herb and his crew wanna be soldiers.....
his rhymes are boring us we need to wake up to some foldiers..... (cofee brand)

overall perfomance 6/10

return the fava:lyricalmethod vs. furious