pimp rawb vs. troublesome
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

10-12

good luck

Siging In

Ya Spit Almost In An Other Lanuage...Might Need Some 1 To Translate-Langustics/
I Flip Shit And Vibrate-Ya-Cystics...You Drop At What I Call Rate-Simplistic/
Ya Vision See Da Future Wrong Ya Fate-Is-Opticmistic(Optic Mistake)/
I Spray-N-Drop-Physics Wit Devine Forces Like Newtons-Laws/
Iam Sending Gama Rays Through-Ya-Jaws To Leave You Cancerous Wit No-Cause/
At Tha Sound Of Appluase I Comit Tha Perfect Killing With No Flaws...
Its Like Tha Purest Carbon...I Send Arrows Through Flows Like A Harpoon/
And Demolish Troublesome In Tha Bargain...
He Just Bacteria In Ma Clothes...He Came From My New Jersey/
But Now He Spinning In Ma Washing Machine As I Apply Some Persil Heavy!/
That Was Peanuts,Dawg You Literally Got Took To Tha Cleaners/
You Couldnt have Sick Spits If u Ate Ur Greeners In Litres....

Fire aint the word son, you're surely far from hot
Fuck winning this by a hair, i'm bout to open up a barber shop
Now you can try to "grasp" his concepts, but the wackness may hinder
Nobody's feelin' his shit, like flushin' frostbitten fingers
Your style is newbish kid, can't get accepted into the worst crew
You should change ya name to...
"I-dash-my-multies and Capitolize Every Word In My Verse Too"
Half your lines don't make sense, future isn't looking too bright
You force wordplay and vocab, yet you can't even spell em right
Face it kid, you're plain wack, you could never be raw b
Everyone knows "P.I.M.P." got played out by BET and MTV
Nobody challenges me, they've seen what Trouble can brew
Lay you on ya back in front of McDonald's so you can see your first W

Blah. first dude had no punches at all... forced mutlis etc.

barbershop line was nice, the rest were pretty weak personals but got the job done.

v/ troublesome.

Dawg I Frestyled That Shit And Ur Just Dumb Cuz Ma Vesre Got Punches And Personals...LoL

Ok ez vote

Rawb-U didnt mention him once for Personals and ur Punches wernt Very hard.Flow was Ok and Structure was bad.

Trouble-Pretty good Punches Personals were Good u stayed on ur Flow and ur Structure was good.

Rawb=6.323/10
Trouble=7.323/10

Vote/Trouble

Not a impressive battle at all, both catz dropped weak but someone's gotta win

Rawb.....multies are nice but they got to be leading somewhere, you had verse full of fillers an forced multies, no punches or personals

Trouble.....you had a weak verse, you did have visible punches an personals but they were really weak, but at least you had some so u get my vote

Vote: Trouble

this week man the league has had some disappointing battles
and this was another one of them

pimp - dude ure flow was aight but choppy in places cuz ure structure was messed up i think. u had no real punches and there wasn't a single personal in there that i cud find, u did use forced multis to.

troublesome - ure spit was weak to but ure flow was aight and ure structure was gud. u had some punches and a couple of nice personals which is what i thought took the battle for u.

V/ - troublesome

breakdown for pimp rawb:

flow:nice job here really working well nice multis at the start 7/10

volcab:solid work here too really lighting it up in these catergories 7/10

punches:not too much here though weak spot in your verse best line,"I Flip Shit And Vibrate-Ya-Cystics...You Drop At What I Call Rate-Simplistic/Ya Vision See Da Future Wrong Ya Fate-Is-Opticmistic(Optic Mistake)/" 6/10

overall:20/30

breakdown for troublesome:

flow:workin not on the same level as pimp rawb though 6/10

volcab:average nothing to run home about though 6/10

punches:best part of your verse you did real well on addressing your oppenent every line fav line,"Nobody's feelin' his shit, like flushin' frostbitten fingers" good job with the punches 8/10

overall:22/30

vote--troublesome gets this, if pimp rawb had had just a couple of more punches it would of been different

Pimp Rawb - Sucked

Troublesome - Didn't ^

Vote - Troublesome

Urm....I think trouble took this 1 but not by much...it was a weak battle idk wat ya was doing probably doing some homework or reading lol while writing but both of ya need ot elevate and actually try doing some real rapping shit next time iight

Trouble=vote

easy decision...vote troublesome...he just had better and more punches...that is what this is all about...

he didn't have great structure or multi's but the punches were there...

so vote troublesome

troublesome wins