bostonlyrcist vs. will s. unyu
 

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verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

sup niccahs
 

Ayo Bl Is Here Holla At Cha Boi,lets Keep It Movin

I am SO going to rape you

lets keep it movin
 

okay,okay,pay attention

victim # 2, too bad so sad--
your flows belong in the desktop recycle bag--
have you nervous like you fucked a bitch raw on her rag--
std inflicted,combined with my lyrical characteristic--
your minds not capabale of decoding my rap linguistics--
i eat, sleep,shit this rap and piss it--
steppin up will get you gunned down like j's last video--
i would call you a dick rida but you more like a titty hoe--
no toilette at home is why your name fits--
your opponents quickly flush cause your flow gives them the shits--
i sit here and watch you decompose as this flowetic power grows--
you a fag you thought nelly wanted you to take off your clothes--
you rape me i aint no bitch off the street--
i'll turn you into an idustry hoe have you eatin out dr phil and tweat--
and let them shit and piss on you while they skeet--
cange your name to (you can S. unme) for the rest of the week---

thats enough im out do what eva yall do wit it---hollah 100

Kid think he's tough,on a roster of a fake team
I mean,anyone can eat a boston baked bean
You're about the Bling Bling and all the flossin
But on the low-how many GOOD rappers come from Boston?
So I'm a bring it home,Boston? is NOT strong
But we all still love you-Like a fuckin kidney stone
III cant stand when you're on my dick cause you lack lust!
Me on I's all<------make sense when you read it backwards!
This battle was no sweat, none of your punches harm me
But you do still have a chance to win-WE ARE ON THE NEW RB!

Wow... boston that sucked. Will sun you wins, even though that verse was pretty weak too, at least it had some flow to it.

"
no toilette at home is why your name fits--
your opponents quickly flush cause your flow gives them the shits--"

^ wtf!?

stuff like that should never be in a verse.

once again...another weak battle

will s. got this though, boston just came horrible, will's best line was his closer....so true

vote = will

DAMN!!!
this is another weak battle

neither of u had any real flow but will u had better flow than boston. both ure structures sucked ass big time. u had no real punches and both of y'all really need to elevate a lot. there was no creativity in ure spits, no decent wordplay or personals. frankly i don't think either of u came at all strong but i'm gonna give the battle to will cuz he had a little more flow than boston and his punches were slightly better.

V/ - Will S. Unyu

^^^

breakdown for bostonlyricist:

flow:alittle sloppy you did betteor here last week 6/10

volcab:average nothing too special 5/10

punches:some alright lines nothing new mainly played ideas fav line,"have you nervous like you fucked a bitch raw on her rag--" 6/10

overall=17/30

breakdown for will s. unyu:

flow:workin basic though 6/10

volcab:nothing to talk about here you need work 5/10

punches:no real lines i liked you addressed the oppenent though i don't know just not liking most of it 5/10

overall:16/30

vote--bostonlyricist

Aiyo Check it..

Boston: 2/10
WeaK Spit, Lacked Every Aspect A Decent Verse Should HAve Put Into It....Where Was The Creativitie and Effort?

Will S Unyu: 3/10
Weak Spit, Lacked ALmost Every Aspect A Decent Verse Should Have...But You Had Sum Punches...Congrats...Elevate

Elvate The Both Of You!!

Vote - Will

~R~

looooooooooooooooooooooooooool
you DID notice that you was the only one that voted against me
right?

Blah.....no explaination needed

Will S Unyu wins.....

Domination anyone.....Boston gave no challange Litterally Will got him in Every Catagory.

V/Will

will s. unyu wins i mainly voted to break the shut out i don't like to see people get shut out