discharge vs. XXToxicXXVerbZ
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

alight checkin in dirt good luck toxic, ~!D!~

O U Know U Beat Me Twice But Now Its Going Down Son// Check In

I'll slash-ur-knees, mutilate ur back-n-spleen, to leave u lookin' like sum1 managed to hack-ur-genes//
Ur rhymes couldn't shine, even if u waxed-them-clean, u couldn't hit if i gave u a bat and let u whack-extreme//
Call me raps cairopracter, when i make ur back-look-lean, crossdressing earned u the right 2 where a sash-4-queen//
U couldn't be ill, even if u had aids then bashed-ur-meat, if u rapped visuals ur rhymes wud luk like plaque attacking-teeth//
I'll silence ur words, like sum1 cracked-ur-speech, so even competing with helen keller wud be a master-feat//

FINISHER:::::::::

I Cause Mad Crucifixions//you Get Ya Brains Ripped Kid//nailed With Spikes///like Christ/// U Get Ya Wigsplit//inject Bleach Chlorid Poison Infect Ya Whole System//free Base//to My Face//anthrax Spittin Wisdom/

S my Knifes 2- pupils- continue 2 '' // - Spread - iris an my VERBZ- ( Toxic ) so i continue 2 '' Spread- VIRUS Gunz-spark From -A- (- Distance-) when im om the M-i-C im just so ( Micnificent ) so 'iLL ' FRACTURE-ya-DOME Shatter-ya-Bone '' an '' RATTLE-ya-DOME '' an ( Break-CORDS ) an LET rusty - Shankz ( ''Grind'') 2 ya Flesh Like ( '' SKATE-BOARDS ' ') I Remain one of the ( '' GREAT-LORDS '' )

SHIT I THINK I LOST B WELL THERES STILL HOPE LET DA VOTES ROLL IN

Wow. This was absolutely terrible. Stretched bars, no punches, useless forced multis, and various other herb shit. Way too much // " and () going on in that second verse. First verse sucked hard too. Punches like these:

"
U couldn't be ill, even if u had aids then bashed-ur-meat, if u rapped visuals ur rhymes wud luk like plaque attacking-teeth// "

and

"
im up against a 13 year old kid with wack rhymes stil tryin for a record label......
he is still in that closet not admitin he likes it anal........."

will not win an actual battle folks. first guy wins for not being quite as bad, and for at least having some personals and punches.

blah.

Yo Dats Flase Personals Yo I Aint No 13 I Aint Going Out Fo No Fuckin Label

im up against a 13 year old kid with wack rhymes stil tryin for a record label......
he is still in that closet not admitin he likes it anal.........no
no one in this league likes you, thats why the put u up againts disharge.......
so quit rhymin, and go back to your pokemon cards......no
i could beat this toxicverbs with 4 lines he aint that much of a contender....
ill rip his spine out and stab him with it,he better surender.....ok
him and lost child used to dickride so much this bitch is cracking his pelvis.....
he should leave miami go to memphis cuz he raps as good as elvis....first line´s tight
i battled him twice and both times i won with a knock out got all five votes....
if bad rapper was a sin you couldnt even be saved by the pope....ok no flow
its a proven fact!! u beating some one good just cant and wont happen....
i got people clappin, do your self a good favor,quit rappin.....first multie
your not a good rappin your fooling yourself, be a man and just confess...
instead of a verse wave the white flag and say " no contest....nice
next time wear some sunblock cuz i turned up the heat, and ur at full exposure....
want some closure? call me lil flip cuz 4 toxic the games over......nice finish

k second guys was a filler, good flow is all you had wit your filling multies but it flowed so it was aight but you had no punches and didnt make sense so i give this to discharge

What the fuck was this.....both had really wack verses, both should lose with the verses they dropped but someone has to advance from this

Discharge......weak punches an personals throughout your whole verse, you had like one multie, an your vocab was basic an blan, you had decent flow an structure was alrite, opener was really weak, closer the same weak, pretty weak drop all in all

XXToxic......you didn't have not one punch or personal, your whole verse was a filler, an you had a whole bunch of forced multies that made it even worse, your lines were painfully strectched, an your flow was horrible, you seriously need to stop battling for a while an jus practice
Vote: Discharge

this was a very weak fuckin battle man!!!

the flow was off in both spits and both verses were good definitions of stretched bars. both u need to work on shortening those lines to get a better structure and flow. neither one of u came with any real punches i think but i give it to discharge cuz he just did better than toxic. he maybe caem with one or two personals and he threw in some links which shows a little creativity.
but seriously if that is the best you to can do then u seriously need to elevate a lot, NO DISRESPECT or anythin, just pointin out ure big flaw!!

V/ - discharge for being less wack than toxic.

pure gayness

wack battle

toxic...you used more fucking symbols than letters...i got a fucking headache reading your "Finisher" you threw absolutely no punches that made sense

dis at least tried

vote = discharge

5-0 discharge wins