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accomplishment vs. L.I.
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checked in...yo dirtby check ur fucking PM's.....
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boom boom boom boom boom boom... check
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gyea accomp when you gonna have your verse?....im done 3 bars of mine already....we could get this shit done early if you want....i will prolly drop tommorow night...
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yeah me too prolly or maybe even tonight cuz i gotta work on some shit for that other tourney
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aight ill try to get it tonight but ima be hittin the books for this huge italian test tommorow....we'll see what happens....
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aight yo i'ma post my verse like at 11 59 just so you can't look at it and try to make urs better...
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lol okay you do that....ill finish keying mine up in a lil bit...gotta get a shower first....good luck accomp......
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the better verse
Accomplishments a hypocrite cause he aint accomplished shit…
Found our no one likes him so he hopped on the reject’s clit… Stop stating that your good, your wack and that’s how the statement goes… With all them damn losses………it’s no wonder your known for KO’s!!… Your careers goin downhill……..like Ja’s did when he decided to sing… And how you expect to win when no one even likes to read what your bring… Hand him a loss, when battling me that’s what you get dude… I understood why people commit suicide after I met you… Spit that weak verse and all you get from voters is the herb stare… He’s not known so he starts beef with vets to get his name out there… Lines I spit are like fire cause they leavin you engulfed like flame machines… Beat wit that played line, oops forgot you dont even no what that term means… I have this bitch paranoid, too afraid to even drop his verse… Obviously he wouldn't understand that real emcees spit first… |
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like a paper eraser, my brain waves, deface ya verse like deflection not a hater,you show up late, after gettin off re$tricted's erection D.R. Disses are played, but this kid is even on the anomyous dick shit i gotta battle this bitch and he remains to rock my name in his sig Losing Inclined, could give b.j.'s for three days and still couldn't whore me i keep tellin this kid its -text-, but he remains to give it to ya'll -orally- regular battle, but when i'm writing a topic this kid is still findin it and meanwhile my punches bust hinges and rip you out da closet you hidin in your jokes, well a know i kill most, so your -crew will get played now-... shit you know what i'm talkin bout thats why you got the name -grayed out- this kids verse is -ass- thats why he's mainly a -fernuter rapper- type ya verse, but it remains to get infected like i'ma computer hacker personally greatin emcees, that why you known for I.M.ing site members post don't matter, because my heavywieght style crushes this light contender continue the beating and expose his ass that i'm handin him were opposites, and if he's the apitimy of awful, then i'm da antynim yo i'll use your own quote to permenattly diminish ya but your best couldn't even swing a punch at my finisher done... |
finally a non-weak battle
l.i. - you cam e alot better last week, still had some nice lines, some lines fell short of hitting hard accomplishment: one of the better verses i've read in the league this week, had some nice punches, you came witty, flowed better than l.i. did this was a good battle, but i have to give it to accomplishment props to both battlers vote = accomplishment |
^fuck outa here herb.....i came hella weak last week.....dickrider....good spit accomp......lets get some REAL damn votes up in here.....
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dickrider?
i don't even know either of you jesus christ...must every single person on this site bitch and whine grow the fuck up |
v/ accomplishment.
Not bad from either.. both came with personals thruout.. dropped consistant.. jus felt LI had more played lines an the links weren`t v.effective.. plus the opener an closer were ya worst lines.. opener was played an closer was weak.. why use a link when he made the comment literally two posts before?? accomplishment flowed nicely.. made it easier to follow.. multis were put to good use.. personals were generally a lil more effective makin` more of the punches harder. |
Decent battle, nice personals throughout. I like the fact this was personal. I felt accomplisments personals while LI's were more generic. Both of yall could have better finishers. Best line in the battle was Accomplishment " i keep telling this kid its text, but he remain to give it to yall orally", Accomplisment punches hit harder. Nice battle
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