Shamira Vs LyRiKaL19
 

Rules:
5 votes win
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6 bars
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I am checking in...i will spit in lesss than 24 hours...peace

Here u go...its long....all over the place...hope yall understand it
 

so u a chick/ don’t act like u can spit/ cuz I spit it all one ure face/ yeah….this is that forum place/ wat I got to say is u a disgrace/
get tha fuck outa here/ they call me jonjon aka lyri/KAL/ its how I do it/
spit it hard and fast/ bringin str8 lyrikal blast/ :shoot:

now how about that/ feel my heat/ meet my gat/ this is that/ ure a stat to that/ once u spit im gonna reply right back/ :laugh:
so u could never put me in my place/ I move to much to be put down/

yea it’s the net/ so wat/ its just lyrical content/ it doesn’t matter wat I say/ just as long as I get to b alive all day/ my life is rough/
u probably got it good/ u act like a dude talking ure shit/
I give u props but just sit/ cause I am the king/ c how I spit/ I talk wat I know/ I do this for money not for show/ so now u know/

so wat u got to say….nothing….its recess time so im here all day/
tell me y they call u sparkle/ seems to me u just some chalk or some charcoal/
nothing u spit is forever/ i will wipe the board and youl be gone forever/

cause im the blood sucka/ I will pull the piece and kill ya bitch/
that’s how lyrical does it/ once u think im done I bring more of it/
im jesus I rise above/ tha all mighty flya/ smoke wat I got and it’ll get ya higha/

u talk like a gangsta/ but uz a lia/ what kind of g askes to battle and has the askee spit first/ THATS WEAK/ I had to say it/ its how lyricals gonna spray it/ all over ya moms face/and i got tha dick for u and im gonna lay it/ put it in your ass and u can suck it so i can spray it

now c here bitch/ this is tha net/ and I talk shit I know/ read the lyrical content/ so rep ure shit and respect mine/

(much luv sparkle...)

They should of told u not to fuck with this high class female, cause I leave niggaz trapped in bars u think u in jail//
you bought ya verse from Master P, so put it up for resale, my lyrical content will have ya brain spinnin like Sprewells//
hurting this bitch cause of my knowledge I make this bitch bleed, I keep this homosexual in cycles like a brand new washer machine//
it goes round and round, it sounds kind of foolish, but I’m a foolish type of bitch, I’ll ripe ya chain off with ya neck attached to it//
see I don’t want to have to do that instead I’ll use my glock, bust ya brains on the pavement, the shit so colorful like a male peacock//
your heart beat stopped its like a fucking cartoon, u was here for a second, now im painting ancient languges on ya tomb//

He didn't know what a bar was! It was suppose to be 6 bars, so im gonna let him slide on this!!!!!! Vote

aight shamira had punches and flow so ima give it to her but lyrikal since our battle i noticed u sound more like u freestylin practice comin up wit rhymes off the top of your head that are just meant for that person

v/shamira

:wtf: lyrikal -sucks balls.....LMFAO that was terrible.......
ur structure sucked,u had wack punches, actuallly u had none....your flow even sucked....and no persononals at all....im not trying to be mean but i honestly think u should stop rapping why u have a chance ok...

shamira-u had some decent punches...ur flow was off....and ur structure was ok....u take this in every categorie....

v/shamira

lyrikal: that was a whack verse no offense dawg shitty punches,
structure not that good at all. flow not that good, vocab was
definitely not the best someone can throw in a verse

Shamira: aight punches...structure wasn't the best but it was
decent, flow was doing aight in the verse, vocab was ok.....

vote goes to: Shamira

do me a favor & do a honest vote on one of my battles aight:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

Iight HOnestly im gonna have to say Shamira won this battle she had 1 bar that was on fire^^^^^^

you bought ya verse from Master P, so put it up for resale, my lyrical content will have ya brain spinnin like Sprewells//

THe rest of the verse was good ........Now for Lyr you need to expand ur lines you make the bar 5 word it need more word that all..ya structure was ok but next time make sure not ever word in the verse is going to rhyme.....Ok battle tho

Lyr had a line i liked but was just good enough

tha all mighty flya/ smoke wat I got and it’ll get ya higha//

Vote-Sham

lyrikal: that was a poor verse man, no offense but you had crappy punches,
Structure was decrepid. Ya flow was weak, and vocab was
definitely not the best someone can throw in a verse.

Shamira: Okay punches, ya structure wasn't the best I've seen, but it beat the hell outa his, ya flow was good most of the way through, some good vocab too.

Vote// Shamira