t-storm vs nips
 

usual rulez
10 lines
u spittin first




gud luk dawg...............................

my verse
 

T-storm whats that bout is it cuz your a storm of tears||
Back down cuz you aint gonna win lets face it its my show||
it must be a crime to waste my time ripping a guy like you||
dog hate to break it to ya but your a a fake cuz u tryed to play thee player||
the only thing i wanna ask is why you still bother coming here?||
with a shit rhyme and no punches your career here is over||
this is gonna be an easy ko cuz man your a joke||
And im gonna leave you trumatised and paralised||
but why and i being so hard on you?||
becuase your a chump trying coming back in afew months time||

haha
 

ok kid....

i dnt know bout u nips..but ma style clearly rips...dog u cnt "rhyme"/
u need wrds 2 match at the end of ya line..here..try imatating "mine"/

first off u need a heavy name, "nips" wnt cut it..try tha alias "fine-mind"/
haha...coz u sound jus like him dawg..another cat that woz "rhyme-blind"/

structure fallin apart wit all that weak "filler".seems u gona remain "unknown"/
need 2 prewrite..cum up wit sumert "iller",thats gud advice... so"go-home"/

i rip u wit a "war of words", ma shits an intoxicatin-verbal-assault/
ima spitfire..cock "my gun n serve"..so sick i lace-ya-wounds-wit-salt/

u rap like a circus clown...u prob a dickrider n wana suck "ma-falace"
..coz fukin wit ma shit..like walkin a tight rope..u aint got tha "balance"


UPIN YHIS SHIT^^^^^^^^^^^^^

T-storm whats that bout is it cuz your a storm of tears||
Back down cuz you aint gonna win lets face it its my show||
0...wtf??? didnt even fuckin rhyme dog!!!
it must be a crime to waste my time ripping a guy like you||
dog hate to break it to ya but your a a fake cuz u tryed to play thee player||
1...no rhymin, but i suppose the crime/time was a rhyme in ure first line!!!
the only thing i wanna ask is why you still bother coming here?||
with a shit rhyme and no punches your career here is over||
0...no rhyme!!!
this is gonna be an easy ko cuz man your a joke||
And im gonna leave you trumatised and paralised||
0...no fuckin rhyme!!
but why and i being so hard on you?||
becuase your a chump trying coming back in afew months time||
0...no rhyme again, that spit was fuckin bullshit!!


i dnt know bout u nips..but ma style clearly rips...dog u cnt "rhyme"/
u need wrds 2 match at the end of ya line..here..try imatating "mine"/
6...nice line rippin his verse there.
first off u need a heavy name, "nips" wnt cut it..try tha alias "fine-mind"/
haha...coz u sound jus like him dawg..another cat that woz "rhyme-blind"/
7...funny shit there!!
structure fallin apart wit all that weak "filler".seems u gona remain "unknown"/
need 2 prewrite..cum up wit sumert "iller",thats gud advice... so"go-home"/
6...nice line but basic wordplay really!!
i rip u wit a "war of words", ma shits an intoxicatin-verbal-assault/
ima spitfire..cock "my gun n serve"..so sick i lace-ya-wounds-wit-salt/
8...nice line, gud multi and some nice wordplay!!
u rap like a circus clown...u prob a dickrider n wana suck "ma-falace"
..coz fukin wit ma shit..like walkin a tight rope..u aint got tha "balance"
6...nice line but again rather basic.


POINTS TOTALS

Nips - 1/50
t-storm - 33/50

V/ - who do u fuckin think???

yo t storm u mudered this fool, u hit harder, u flowed much better and u made sense, whereas "nips" (ha ha ha) Couldn't rhyme, made no sense n was jus out right weak, "nips" take note & practice.
v/ t storm

HMMM familiar style cant pin point it oh course i can look at T's verse its obvious who it is nice try im uppin this for my fam member

Vote-T storm...
Nips i didnt even need to read all of your verse to decide
u wasnt gonna get much out of this battle..
T storm nuthin speactacular but took this guy easily.
vocab flow wordplay multis u came on top

weak, weak, weak

nips
ya flow waz all weak and u hardly had blowz, we both newbiez but u shouldn't act like 1, u had an alright structure but, u need better defense than that...try harder next time

t-storm
ya structure waz bad but u had blowz and that'z what countz, u hurt this kid, dawg. u need better structure cauze i waz gettin confuzed with what u did and all those " " " " ", but u did good

rating
opener, t-storm
structure, nips
blowz, t-storm
clozer, t-storm

da vote goez 2...t-storm

good, nips is probably a female MC cauze it's probably short 4 nipplez

try harder

wow this shit was some true shit t ripped u he aint even have to come hard he could have just used plain and simple RHYMES and he woulda won u some shit. nips u need to go read some goose and learn to rhyme for ur own good

ok
 

cud anyone explain how ma structure woz bad?...i kept tha same line length..
rhymed in tha right places......^^^^^no hate on your opinion dawg...
but if we being real ma structure woz pretty tite...his woz all ova the place...
sumone tell me if im wrong??

nips- learn to rhyme man, that shit was weak, there ain't even no categories i could vote for ya in

t- ya suprised me in this, was one of your best shit i ever read, still battlin newbies but do you kid, only really bad line was the filler iller, unknown go home one, weak and it didnt rhyme but your verse still killed this cat