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Hyperbole v. mc's reaper
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blind spits No feeding drop after check in 100 posts to vote |
checkin in and will be droppin in a quick sec. hold up.
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Here's my check in dude
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Intro:
In the mind-of-a-killa , you should look for signs-of-a-thrilla/ so when my gaul of the murder builds look at these lines-as-a-pillar/ dine-with a deala , of cards of death prime-in-the-build-up/ so when the seeker finds its victim this rhyme-is-familar/ ThoughT You think ya golden till the beam-explosions hit ya hemoglobin / ya gums a teeth-loose-hold-and ya bleed from ya spleen-to-scrotum/ the streets dispose weak control heat like a demons-omen/ Squeeze the fo, till his cheeks look like feces while decompose’in/ skeptic to epileptics? I’m seasoned to be-the-chosen/ so I can seize seizures for leisure and leave’em-broken/ my atomic sonnets make nuclei leave-the-prozin/ and brings pain to the point ya joints plead for a scream-to-cope-wit/ worst than any nightmare you just gotta dream-I’m-joke’in/ creeds-I’m-hold’in, till we can perceive that the beef-is-croak’in/ spill ya guts on ya thighs till it look like ya knees-is-choke’in/ and medics see ya stomach say fuck it!! and leave-it-open/ tears freeze if you grieve-while-frozen now G you can’t breathe- for-roast’in/ death spoons and feeds you with ease, please heed-the-doses/ picture ya self as me lives thieved I greed-for-ghost’in/ now smile and say cheese while ya body is seed-for-rodents/ Memory Bank My whims-come-in-handy, disappear like a gem-from-the Ramsey’s/ get choked till ya throat dries and ya flim’s-feel’in-sandy/ drooling at pictures of the scene like the film-was-some-candy/ cuz my errors highest rating is.... slim-as-it-can-be/ yes I get Savage like a Slim-Jim-wit-Randy/ cut ya torso more so put ya skin-in-da-pantry/ merk cousins uncles and if I’m still-feel’in-Antsy/(/Aunt=Ant) I’ll make a brand new body from the limbs of ya family/ |
'Stiffin' You Like 'Arthritis'.. Ya 'Joints'-Are-Tossed..//
He Had To Exceed The Line Limit To Get His Fucking Point-Across..// Instead I'll Deploit-A-Loss..// Sending Jabs.. Making Sure I'm Punching-Out-This-Fuck..// It's Like You 'Escaping Cloverfields'.. Cuz You 'Running-Out-Of-Luck..'// That Shit Was Nothing But Filler... A Bunch Of Deceiving-Lines..// I Wonder Which Notebook Did You Fucking Retrieve-Ya-Rhymes..// That Came Off Paper.. It Did'nt Just Leave-Ya-Mind..// You A 'Board' Cat 'Elevating'.. Dawg You Got Some 'Trees'-To-'Climb'..// This Cat Is 'Comical'.. Ya Good-To-'Cap'-On..// Get Your Whole Profile Embarrased.. Ya Grim Reaper will Make Sure His Hood-Is-Back-On..// Coming With Heat That My Blows-Equipping..// I See You Chose-A-Written..// Getting a Win Off Me? But Like 'Clumsy Garden Tools' this 'Hoe'-Is-'Tripping'..// I'm Sticking-With-Hits..// But Like 'Folklores Throwing Up'... You're 'Fiction'-With-'Spits'..// This Cat Will Get Bum Rushed.. You Stand Stiff-In-A-Blitz..// Kind Of Like Have 'Bow Movements' In 'Bar-B-Que' Grills.. Cuz Ya 'Shit-Is-The-Pits'..// I'm A Gift-With-The-Wit..// 'Drop The Beef' Like Laziness And 'Flopping-Of-Cattle'..// Where The Fuck Are The Disses At.. This Ain't A Topical-Battle..// One |
Aiight uppin 4 votes
Good drop dude |
Yeah of course uppin.
Good drop also. Lets get some. This battle is for the respect list. |
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That shit is hard young. but my over all vote goes to him because he came harder to me even though you had a hel of a drop also. Nice job. Aye also if you dont have a crew come and holla at us, and I got a top spot for you, after seeing ya post here, one-1 100-hunid. |
Damn you on this nigga dick hard. He went over the line limit.
It's straight though, nice explanation. Uppin |
dam u both had good punches but I have to go with MC for he had more personals( I believe) and he had some comedy and he had a better closure. so my vote goes to MC
hit up on this battle thnx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128196 |
ayo uppin for votes, god damn, this battle was a min. ago.
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Ayo, whoa can I please get this battle out the way, who ever votes on this battle I promise to vote in two of yours. Two for one cant beat that...
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hey you weer both really good... but mc's got it
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Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet Ill be sure to vote on dis one |
I think this was a pretty kool battle...but MC's flow was better ... he had some good punches too.... my vote goes to MC!
Return tha fava, and vote on mah battles down there!! \/ \/ \/ \/ Crasher!!~~!!~~!!~~!! |
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