Shamira Vs blackmon
 

Rules:
5 votes win
8 bars
check in before dropping a verse
no crew votes
explained votes
u spit first


Checking in!!!!!!

a this is black checkin in

Say this isnt a battle this is a fight wit a dyke id rather be on tv fightin tyson wit a mike people say my shit is weak and you need to go home and practice but sparkle you need to stop swollowin mens cum out of 8 oz glasses you will recognize my skills or youll be like sadom and blow up for real thinkin you like ben laden hiden away I will catch you with the ak ready to spray and ill be damend in this rap game i come out last When you lookin like the thirteen year old micheal jackson harrased

Kiss my ass sparkle comin wit that hate vote shit i think it was just another excuse for you to suck on my dick

Man I won fuck that :nono: :thefinger
:spit:

I just saw this, and it looks to me that u just dropped it! So, right now i got to leave and take my little cuz to day care...i'll be bk!!!!!

Yo black. Was that like the Dick Ridin vote you gave me on the Mad Dog battle. Kiss ya own ass if ya can't take the preassur then leave.

this nigga got to be fake melty like plastic, instead of regular DNA his blood is the color of battery acid//
your truly, a loser he’s afraid to show his pic, u tell me I want to suck your dick, I have no time for tooth picks//
this bitch doesn’t know what bars is, even if I throw him in jail, faggat ass nigga begging Cassidy if he can go to his hotel//(can I plz have the key..lol)
nigga wouldn’t scream help if it was rape, fucking up this cat hormones, jacking off by looking at R.kelly’s dick in porno tapes//(feeling on ya boooooty)
I load up my gat shout ya ass up like the Russians did denzel in Training Day without a firm, matter fact u look like denzel in the Malcolm X movie with that ugly ass perm//
I told u to stay off the shit in the first place, want to chase men around so much u forgot how cum taste//(slurping the bitch up so much)
Also stop acting like ya ass is bone crusher on rap city, I mean u fat like his ass, but just call yourself Mrs. Peggy//
Why u talking about MJ, cause he kept u underneath the covers, now u trying to say your ass wasn’t there, or u didn’t see it, this bitch is acting like he blind like Stevie Wonder //(there’s a ribbon in the sky for our love...lol)

WHAT DA?

huh?

were u two droppin for the same battle


wayyyyyyyyyy lopsided...

Vote: Shamira

BUT...some advice SHAM...


I hope ur a female...cuz that DICK line will get u booted nigga

#2...make your bars a tad shorter...that will better the flow...but, your rhyming was good enough to pull it off

Set ur punches up so they'll be more exciting...it seems like ur just talking instead of flowing

UGH

vote: SHAM

blackmon
Say this isnt a battle this is a fight wit a dyke id rather be on tv fightin tyson wit a mike people say my shit is weak and you need to go home and practice but sparkle you need to stop swollowin mens cum out of 8 oz glasses you will recognize my skills or youll be like sadom and blow up for real thinkin you like ben laden hiden away I will catch you with the ak ready to spray and ill be damend in this rap game i come out last When you lookin like the thirteen year old micheal jackson harrased
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Wow. Is that all your opener or closer? thats a long ass bar with no punctuation or structure at all. Is your "." button broke or somethin? anway nice flow. Not much vocab. Overall 15/30
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shamira
this nigga got to be fake melty like plastic, instead of regular DNA his blood is the color of battery acid//
your truly, a loser he’s afraid to show his pic, u tell me I want to suck your dick, I have no time for tooth picks//
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Good opener. Nice personal. 8/10
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Why u talking about MJ, cause he kept u underneath the covers, now u trying to say your ass wasn’t there, or u didn’t see it, this bitch is acting like he blind like Stevie Wonder //
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Aite finish, nothin special. could've bin better 5/10
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You had good punches all the way through, I liked the "Bars" one. That was heavy. A good structure and flow. Overall 23/30


The stats show that shamira is the winner. So blackmon u jus like you described yourself. You really do come out last lol. (oh yea. Thats how ya vote on a battle. Non of that 2 line dick ridin shit)

[QUOTE=shamira]this nigga got to be fake melty like plastic, instead of regular DNA his blood is the color of battery acid//
your truly, a loser he’s afraid to show his pic, u tell me I want to suck your dick, I have no time for tooth picks//

this bitch doesn’t know what bars is, I told u to stay off the shit in the first place, want to chase men around so much u forgot how cum taste//(slurping the bitch up so much)

Why u talking about MJ, cause he kept u underneath the covers, now u trying to say your ass wasn’t there, or u didn’t see it, this bitch is acting like he blind like Stevie Wonder //(there’s a ribbon in the sky for our love...lol)[/QUOTE]

overall performance: 7/10

these are sharmiras best lines. blackmon your shit ain't even worth postin. shamira you kill him. you structure was good. spittin first is always a disadvantage........ furthermore shamira don't try to cram punches in to your lines. you could have killed him without a punch. better punches and lyrics period. return the fava

vote=shamira

Thanks for the votes, still uppin!!!! By the way blackmon, who's on ya dick now..lol!!!
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mira took this battle, her unches were better, and her structure was actually readable...took me five minutes to figure out the rhymes in dudes spit...punches are the most important thing in a battle and he didnt have any that hit hard, so
vote=mira

im not a "freeposter" but the other rapbattles place is fucked up peep it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130389

look at the "/" aftr brawl and tell me ur thoughts plzz


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ummm blackmon wat was dat no offense but u need a new style

well shamira owned diz battle, flow, punches, complexity he had all dat good shit

vote Shamira

plz can u hit up my battle wit Illest Sin, link is in da sig