RapVerse.com Community - freestyle mc (feedbak plz)

im this great lyrical mc//
everybody wanna b like me//
kill like me//
rap like me//
b free like me//
u wanna test me believe me//
ull come out on ur hands a knees//
rollin up trees//
dealin ma weed//
all i got do is get it together//
me n u in a fite it wouldd b like the bird v the fether//
im clever//
i never//
fought i could ever//
get this far wait a minute i aint no1 yet//
in dept//
livin wit ma moma still smokin cigarettes//
i kept//
a clean mouth//
part from wen i lik a girl down south//
alow//
wot u think it dont matter//
to me//
screw me//
b tru to me//
n if ya wanna heres ma details u can sue me//
i blew this//
i new this//
hu,would,could do this//
i drown ppl wit ma piss//
thats how sadistic i am//
even tho im a vegetarian i dont eat ham//
i eat greens//
lean// mean//
beans//
take it from the king//
it takes a lot more than mcin to get a diamond ring//
and all da bling//
its hard to beleive wot comes up from ma jaw//
word like fuks shit bollaks whorre//
u no wen i put together every word im raw//
dont hold back//
such a twat//
im evil//
im not sure where ma shit is legal or illlegal//
its hard to tell//
i no it carnt b sellin much i still aint livin well//
more like im in hell//
i gotta make it to heaven//
im doin ma work shit 24 severn//
i take ma rhymes global//
n to ma m8s im very noble//