Determination in tha game...my part for a collabo on anotha site
 

Aiyo,

I came here in the same gear I remain in..only difference is..-
I've refrained from my main fear..I had to give up that simple bizz..-
Then I sat back and watched wack cats reap all the benefits..-
I was determined to attack back wit raps that could end that shit..-
Elevation was the way to greatness..up late wit mad verses wasted..-
Scratchin' out metas for better ones..better, but I still ain't make it..-
Listenin' to all the critics..I was bitter when they didn't prasie it..-
Nigga claimed that I was crazy..truth is, I wasn't even phased when..-
The powers that be erased me..I stood ground and came back blazin'..-
Upped my complexity when the tested..like I'm not even the same kid..-
The chalk lines drawn across the black board spell out my name..-
Walkin' that same chalk when I was murdered..now I'm back for fame..-
Resurrected like old-man erection..surprised I even got up to rep shit..-
Doin' this for my own records..I wreckon I've overstepped discretion..-
Wreckin' these records..focus like the sharpest laser in Nasas's collection..-
Aimed directly at things that mess with..my attempts, ain't no exception..-
My rap foot is lead pressed down on the game's pedal..fuck the ribbons..-
I'm all forward like Pippen..medals I ain't gettin', I'll settle for attention..-
Knowin' I didn't give in..given the amount of hate niggas was dealin..-
I'm still here chillin'..droppin' lyrics tellin' ya'll what I'm feelin'..-

Uh

if only you couldbe that hot all the time and not cry when you get voted against lil bitch

^^^ ya...thanx for the "feedback" HOMIE..


P.S...I don't cry when I get voted on...i jus hate DR bull --ish


Nuff Said...uppin dis for feedback

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everything in that verse was HOTTNESS stay up
and keep advancin cuz i ain't hatin.....7/10
1 Luv

good shyt ima give it a 7.5/10 keep it goin kid............................................... ..

thanx for feedback

uppin

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hot shit son keep up holla!