blackwell vs eyedentdy
 

ok 8-10 lines
no crew votes n gl should be good

ok i will spit 1st, n the post is due by thursday but i will spit mine now, u can to or then

ok i will post my spit this thursday coz i aint got time rite now man

battlin me'll cost an arm and a leg/
(Question)
How do you keep a bitch from drowning? take my foot off the back of his head/
cause this kid dont wanna battle, he's a rookie/
He'd rather go door to door and sell me girlscout cookies/
fuck it, you'd be lucky if I dont take your lunch money/
I told you could take till Thurseday, what more does this fake rapper want from me/
Blackwell, I'll wait for you in the room with the padded walls/
but Its hard to talk back with my dick and balls in your jaw/

you've gotta spit befor thurseday or this shit wont work to good now will it?

u prolly lost more battles than wot makes a "century", u could prolly walk in to a club wit 10 yr olds n still get asked for "identity"/
victory was "ment-for-me", I asked god for one good battle n look wot "chump" tha stupid "cunt" !sent-to-me!/
ya should walk round wit a bilboard sayin "bent-is-me"..lol ringin as many rappers as ya can askin how much is to "rent-a-G"/ LMFAO!!
YA LOST THERE n ya words are mere "confusion", ya cant progress coz wot ya need is a fukin brain "transfusion"/
clever??? nah he far "from-it", i set up a stage in front of him n he didnt even know how to "climb-on-it"/
like hard DNA ya loss has been "proven" so now im bout to kick outta the game like a fukin fottball "hooligan"/

on the last line it supposed to say kick ya outta the game

This im gonna give to Blackwell coz he was real hard hittin and the punches were cool. The only thing i can really suggest is keep workin on the wordplay to up yoself but u need help wit the Structure.

Eye you didnt try at all i werent feelin it at all elevate dawg u can become quite good u got the rhymes but work on the punches and u'll do real good

V/Blackwell

Punches-Blackk (more witty... Eyedentdy, you should try to be more creative wid ya punches homie)
Multis-Blackk (Eye had none)
Flow- Eye (Eye's was kinda hard to follow coza da structure, but Blackk's lackked a lil flow coza his multis-U had em at da beginning and da end of ur lines, but u gotta have em in da middle most importantly or your flow will fall off as it did)
Personals- Tie (werent any)
Wordplay-Blackk (not all dat but still good, and Eye had none)
Complexity/Creativity-Blackk (no contest here. Eye, ur verse was pretty simple cuzz.
Overall VOTE-Blackk

battlin me'll cost an arm and a leg/
(Question)
How do you keep a bitch from drowning? take my foot off the back of his head/

/\wft/\ steal black jokes now man

um he bit i am sorry eyedenty bit
any one ever her of jin from ruff ryders cuz this kid did he battled ski-zo on freestyle friday on bet this kid watched
cause this kid dont wanna battle, he's a rookie/
He'd rather go door to door and sell me girlscout cookies/

o ski-zo said
im the one you dont wanna battle, hes a rookie,
leave rap alone and keep making fortune coookies,

um witha lil change of words you bit man

v/blck well

return the favor links in the sig man

and eyedenty no hate votes ethier you bit i didnt

Kountry U lyin sak of shit, U Bubba Sparxxx wanna be, I aint Hear Skitzo say that shit. Get off my dick.

eye

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10

black

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10

v/ Black

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blackwell takes this,,.props 2 u dawg....u elevated a lot since i last saw 1 of ur battles......gud punches,nice wordplay..............jus up ya personals...fix ya structure,gud spit dawg...keepit up

eyedentity
structure woz really weak.........punches and creativity needs upin a lot...............not much i can say but elevate homie

vote-blackwell

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tight work, I dont agree with that shit but ow well. I lost, its kewl.