dawgfatha_13 V/S cityboi
 

rules:

10-15 lines
no d/r or unexplained votes
blind spit
first to 5 or 3-0 knockout
then whatever


Eli-22 = toonice = cityboi = Ghostrida = all DQ'ed for cheating

When u see me in da streetz u betta take cover it'z not a storm lil boi it'z city'z takeova.
U tryin 2 battle me iz like ya moms tryin 2 stay off her knees
Yo think u tyght but daz all hype i stick dynamite in ya ass and like luda u can blow it out ya ass.
Don't worry kid i'm not gonna hurt maybe have u raped shot stabbed and thrown off a roof.
My ryhmes str8 blow ya mind if ya gurl wuz a dyme dumb bitch would be mine
In ya rules u say first to 5 or 3-0 knockout well watch out boi cuz i'm da knockout king and i crushed ya lil dream.
Dis guy prolly sittin her sayin w/e but when it'z all said and done i'm still murkin dis fella
U stepped up to da plate to battle da great but like fat ppl and food u bout to get ate
I'm steppin on dis guy he has no heart instead of fuckin bad bitches he rather sit around and play in da park.
I dunno why he battled me he knew it wuz ova i pulled his spine thru his ass silly bitch fell ova.

ayo
Dis emcee thinks he can beat me?
But who ended up laughing while I was carryin yo body to tha autopsy?
To figure me out this wigga needs a dictionary
But how much more complicated can my raps get?
But dis Boi's so weak,I wont unleash my real fury yet
Dis punk is from da city,and claims hes real good
Sorry,CityBoi,Beverly Hills aint a hood
His whole career he aint touched a dime
Cause he sucks,he should learn to rhyme
But it don't matter I'll have im exterminated in 2 shakes of a cat's tail
Even if you run,my flair won't fail
So think before battlin da dawgfatha
You got so many enemies,your death wont botha

i dunno wut to say dis battle was ok but i mean u both need 2 elevate ya ryhme but if i had 2 give it to sumbody it would be city jus cuz he came out a lil harder than da dawg

v/city

blah blah blah

we need to have a rhyming SEMINAR for you people...

4 real...

these battles would be way more interesting if they at least rhymed...CITY

and Dawg...ur structure is way to simplistic...build upon a solid punch by adding metas and wordplay in ur lines

both elevate

Vote: City...more of an attempt at a battle verse


UGH

umm fellaz this battle was pretty much on da weak side of things. city boi no disrespect homie but yo your verse was straight butt dog. I mean it ain't make no sense it ain't flow together at all and punches? You wasn't even slappin.
Dawg your verse was pretty weak too but it was better than your opponents. Tha structure was way better and it did flow better than city's. Tha little flow it had. Yall boyz could and should step it up though.

vote=dawgfather
Yall come thru and peep this
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...194#post1313194

these battles would be way more interesting if they at least rhymed...CITY
and Dawg...ur structure is way to simplistic...build upon a solid punch by adding metas and wordplay in ur lines
both elevate
Vote: City just a better style and one conecting punch

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aight citi had stronger punches but u didnt rhyme. dawgfatha u need work wit it but overall ok battle so my vote goes to citi cause of his punches.

v/citiboy

^^^^ i agree none of dis rhymed but boi had better punches both of yall stay up though
v/cityboi

wtf are you people sayin,all of it rhymed if any of you are at least intelligent in any way.....but w/e.uppin for votes....................

yo this battle was cool but not great...city ur flow was aight and ur wordplay was ok but u really need to wok on ur sturcture other than that it was just average...dawg..ur verse was ok to not great u had a somewhat better stucture but u came up short on wordplay so imma have to give the slight edge to city for better overall verse

yo hit this open mic up its in my sig holla

City had this one...had harder punches 'n' shit in his

Vote = CityBoi

explain your votes plz........uppin

i felt dawgs verse was betta......better punches

vote dawg return the fava vote on my battle there on my sig

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no problem^^.uppin