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Fourmost Vs.fine mind
Ight You Requested The Battle call So you drop first
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ayo, killing you bitch is my goal, to end your life in a tradgedy//
putting each contact adressed in a mutha fuckin cemetary// im-a-spit-fucker, makin-people-quit, like retirein u b4 to old// im a lyrical demen slayer, your like an underdog sleepin playa/ got no brain waves, bump into mine power blasting like a rave/ i'll stop you growing, stop you stunned and parolysed loseing// feel my flow it'll melt you down vapourising, as if i was the sun// im gonna break through you like a million metal objects stabbin you/ leaving your body in a heap telling your boys your just sleeping// im a outrageous human bein, putting you down instantly without blinkin// |
Ight I stretched my bars a bit so i didn't spit the full amount of bars
Dis Cat Gone Nuts Without Bolts The Way He Come At Me/Ya Left Lickin Tha Butts Of Colts 'n' Get Sprayed Wit Shit 'n' Pee/1 Neva Mentioned My Name So I'm Wonderin If Thats Urs//Give Ya Neck A Hyperextension So Fuck You And Ya Dragqueen Whores//2 /Choppin Fine Mind So Call Me Hannible Lectre/ Snap Crackle 'n' Poppin wit Devine Lines 'n' Turn To A Cannibal Spectre/3 //This Male Anal Investigator Got A Loud Bark But No Bite// Fail To Contest Like A Old Man Wit False Teeh In This Fight//4 /Comin Up Short In More Ways Than One, Ya Midget Dick Not Reachin Tha Pussy Port,Ya Hot Dog Can't Make Tha Bun/5 //Stun Wit High Voltage Tazers, Only Pussy You Get Comes In Tons That Needs Lawn~mowers To Act Like Razors//6 /Cage Dis Player Cuz His Rhymes Are Ugly As Beast/ Almost As Nasty When Ya Munch Ya Moms Infection Of The Yeast/7 //Increased Toll Of Tha Deceased As Soon As The Poll Is Realeased//Wit Knucklesanwiches For Ya Final Feast//8 Vote up! |
Best Of Seven Votes
3-0 For KO Please Explain All Votes Thanx!! |
Uppin Cuz This Gettin Slept On Hard
plz Explain Usin This Multis- punches- personals- flow- creativity- overall- |
aight here we go
Multis-four Flow-both Punches-four Personals-four Creativity-four wordplay-four overall-ma vote fourmost wun be ez nice drop finemind |
Multis-fine
Flow-four Punches-four Personals-four Creativity-four wordplay-four overall-four |
Ight Uppin 2-0 Zip But One Of Them Forgot To VOTE ONTHE POLE
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I Smell A KO Uppin Yall Stop Sleepin , More Votes!!
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ayo, killing you bitch is my goal, to end your life in a tradgedy//
putting each contact adressed in a mutha fuckin cemetary// this was a weak opener, it had a weak flow and the punch wasn't very good either im-a-spit-fucker, makin-people-quit, like retirein u b4 to old// im a lyrical demen slayer, your like an underdog sleepin playa/ got no brain waves, bump into mine power blasting like a rave/ i'll stop you growing, stop you stunned and parolysed loseing// feel my flow it'll melt you down vapourising, as if i was the sun// im gonna break through you like a million metal objects stabbin you/ leaving your body in a heap telling your boys your just sleeping// im a outrageous human bein, putting you down instantly without blinkin// the rest doesn't flow at all, you missspelled alot, its just all in all not good,- No solid punchlines, no good wordplay- try and check out some of the tutorials here and get a better grasp on what ur tryin to do.. /Choppin Fine Mind So Call Me Hannible Lectre/ Snap Crackle 'n' Poppin wit Devine Lines 'n' Turn To A Cannibal Spectre/3 //This Male Anal Investigator Got A Loud Bark But No Bite// Fail To Contest Like A Old Man Wit False Teeh In This Fight//4 /Comin Up Short In More Ways Than One, Ya Midget Dick Not Reachin Tha Pussy Port,Ya Hot Dog Can't Make Tha Bun/5 //Stun Wit High Voltage Tazers, Only Pussy You Get Comes In Tons That Needs Lawn~mowers To Act Like Razors//6 I just quoted a couple verses here-- This was much better it actually had punchlines in it, a decent flow good wordplay-- the struc was a little strange but it was consistent- Your opponent should try and elevate to this level at least very quickly.... Vote - Fourmost |
yo dis battle wuz str8 but i think 4 had da uppa hand so i'm gonna give it to him but da otha guy wuz ight so stay up
vote=four |
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Flow-both Punches-four Personals-four Creativity-four wordplay-four overall-fourmost he had betta punches v/ fourmost |
please return the favor link in sig
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Dats A KO Already But Uppin For More Votes I Guess
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the second one won i dont know which one it is though im confused if its fine minds representative then yea fine mind won
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