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RumpleSmoothspin 05-25-04 04:12 PM

10 minute freestyle~ Peep n rate im new~
 
10 minute freestyle right here... leave some feed peeps~~~ :thumbup:

Leave peeps gather around, feelin astound, veins thumpin like im pumpin ya heart down to grounds/
Handz down to clownz, that i shove around, for wins and other things that i wunt mention right now/
Profound to carry multi crowns, havin pounded n drowned oponents in gowns, as skill let em down/
Sounds out mouths,tortured the clowns n' found impounds to carry tortures, out of police bounds/

Switch... some peeps might not get this flow.. but read it fast and ull notice it.......

Cut n hacked open, stacked and jacked ropes nd cracked necks to destroyed hopes when i throw/
jokes out of windows, laser scopes to hitt the domes, although ma targets unknown i still let bullets go/

Vests penetrated, chest ripped and shredded, corpse embedded, in organs and blood red~ed/ (reded- made red)
clothes on corpses, lying dead n de~headed in crafted caskets, for the future protectors/

CPR 05-25-04 07:56 PM

i liked it good flow just kepp workin on it

PoLiFicK 05-25-04 08:25 PM

nice but more like 1 minute tho ahaha nahh but tite shit feed back on u juss got served

MoTiF 05-25-04 08:34 PM

Ummm wasnt feelin it Much but good for U bein New and All i give it a 5.3243/10

RumpleSmoothspin 05-26-04 01:53 AM

Lmao... aight dawg... it was a freestyle.. just wait when i start spittin seriously~1~

Soul Sickness 05-26-04 09:04 AM

wasnt feelin it it was too long the flow was a lil to choppy but def not that bad i give it a 6/10 keep elevtin.........


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