Da Jokah Vs Green Martian
 

rules iz:
10 to 25 lines
no d.r / hate or crew votez
u spit first
no bite/recyclin
due 30 mins afta chek inz aight
be ez wun......

checkin in..holla back wun... checkin in den spit homie wun..

chek in and drop ..dawg lets goo

check in sorry . .................

no problem lets get diz done be ez

U can say what chu want but neva seen the green deamon,
Laughin loud filled ur girls mouth with green's dirty seman,
Eyes red constantly cause i cant stop the smokin,
My style raw potent im not suprised ur choking,
how u write succesfull lirycs when peps cry when u joking,
pokin in cocain quick like shogun spread blood flash of ma katana workin,
Farming goods shine u off with a thousend carrots,
drop pursuing internet pirecy on shoulder wearing fake parots,
Spark a blunt an insent elevate the concetration,
How u gona spit u havin trouble keping a conversation,
Dirt shake u off ma rotation,
5 plantations im fuckin rich thats why i made the sperm donation,
congratulation cutin ur corps up worst than ma first patient,
Why u call this freestyle sound like ur verses pre-writen,
I left the battle when i was finished felt like ma ass was bitten,
Legendery, how can bitches call me cow when i don't eat dairy, goin out vilont make ur rear look more purple than bluebarry, life ordinary mind further than my home galaxy,
Close ur wounds bledding all on tha floor hee is a pad from maxi,

u got 30 minutes man good luck do ur best ull need it

dis man got dirrty green cum..sumthins wrong wit diz bitch//
iam holdin a dirrty lean gun... coked ready for this snitch//
and hey martian havnt i seen u on like da bugs bunny show//
diz nigga is staight buggin..he thinkin a thugs funny yo//
till he pull out da glock and have ya mom say bye sweety//
iam selvesta..and u dat damn bird..cum here and die tweety//
fill da room up wit gas..but it aint da laughin shits//
runn up in ya crib dumb ass...and ill be blastin clipz//
iam da biggest pimp eva...ill be draftin clits//
u had a crew didnt chu..and it got folded liek a blanket//
went to tha docters..pissed in dem cups..and u dranket//
nasty lil faggit..i saw u on da corna werin dem panty hoes//
da green cum ..is cummin from all dem manly hoes//
isnt it nigga dont deny it..cuz bubba told me//
now as ya father..iam madd..u gay u should have told me//
have 4 niggas run on u wit a pipe like in a relay//
hate niggas dat gettin they pussy like u off ebay//
waitin for u to cry so i can give u a fuckin cleenix..shit//
and ill pop u up if i find out that u gon' remix dis//
and yo gotta keep this battle short but ill see u on looney toons//
thinkin u dre and shit...remixin his beats..turnin them into looney tunez//

and yo Green Martian kan u get me an autograph from Bugs//
dis battle fuckin u up like its da first time u takin dem drugs//

wun be ez..

hey this was an easy one to vote on basically its like this... green martian u had good stuff.. but when u talking about green sperm that cant be good... you might want to get that checked out.. jokah ur punches hit way harder than green sperm so i gotta give it to u

joka- some gangsta shit man it was tight but that gangsta shit wont win you battles it will just make hot club bagners that it man ok yor stutur was bad go work on that there was no word play and you punches involed guns do you even got any ok work on that

Green- once agian you flow was off man bad, very bad man when you work on that you will be goos cuase you use word play man you do it was hot word play punches were there but not hot so work on those to

v/ Green

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Yes.. you took his soft green sperm, punch and flipped on him through the whole spit...
THe green sperm line was prolly martians hardest line and jokah smashed it...1

Jokahs Punches Were Way Better Than Green's, You Had a not bad verse green but ya need harder punches
vote = da jokah

uppin diz shit wun....

uppin fo votes on diz muh fuckah aight holla back ill return a vote in favour if u vote on diz..holla back wun be ez.........................................

Yo Green Martian or wateva, Int that the same shit exactly that u spit against Illmaticstatic?? Thats pathetic if it is. Anyway, I didnt really like the verse the fisrt time round, couldn't follow the flow, and some of the rhymes i jus didnt get.
Jokah, I like your verse, Followed th flow, could picture it in real battle,
"fill da room up wit gas..but it aint da laughin shits//
runn up in ya crib dumb ass...and ill be blastin clipz//"
That was my favourite line of the battle, ggreat punches from Jokah,
Punches were weak from Martian, likeall you tlaked about was farming shit, whats up with that??
My vote : Da Jokah