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Ace Diamond vs. Mike12Ikeda
no dickriding, crew, hate votes.....
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Ikeda sit down boi, Ace Diamond the new kid Its gonna get messy, so baby lemme get u a new bib U choke and cough When I rhyme girls clothes be taken -off U suck at flowin thats why ur funds have been cuttin-off If I flow nicely,u must be rather bumpy Ur mom so fat I be callin her Humpty Dumpty But she didnt sit on the wall, she fell right thru Then she had a screwed up baby, ahah and it was u Ur the pussy that everyone talks about, cuz u still suckin on tits No need to cry over this... We know u cant make hits .... Ur lame man, those punches will never reach Me fighting you, is like Lenox Lewis boxing Screech U rocking a St. Louis hat, acting like your from the south Talk louder man, I cant hear with that dick shoved down ur mouth I dont even wanna diss you know we bus- riders But when it comes to ur mom they call me, muff-divers Going down wit no oxygen, smellin like a skunk Quite rapping boi, go back to Jazz and Punk When I rap its do -or -die I look my oponent straight- in- the -eye I kill ya wit ya own sam-ur-ai Don't get it twisted like dem Mobb Deep Boyzz Peoples sit down when they hear ur noise I make the crowd jump, u make em twirl their gum And I heard wat Reena said when u was about to cum She said "Ull either finish to quickly, or never finish -it" My nicknames Caca cuz they now i am the illest- shit |
Your like awful skaters I’ll have you crashed-into-these-“boards”
I ain’t afraid to battle any emcee like I been-to-the-wars You’re new to this game like the Charlotte Bobcats Your wackness could have forced Run DMC to stop-rap You getting a win is as rare as flipping an “ace diamond” It’s time-then to see that you can’t rap even if you had rhyme-pen Take it easy on weak emcees like I faced kind-men You could type with your brain, and still not “show intelligence” Your rhymes have no-relevance, put a Caddy symbol on ‘em to flow-elegant You aren’t the number one diamond so please be-gone Cause the real ace diamond’s found somewhere under the ground of Sierra Leone…. |
Ikeda sit down boi, Ace Diamond the new kid
Its gonna get messy, so baby lemme get u a new bib ^^ well thats not a punch, fill your verse with punches not self glorification When I rhyme girls clothes be taken -off U suck at flowin thats why ur funds have been cuttin-off never rhyme two of the same words togther^^^ u overall lacked punches and i hate that wackass sytructure ur new so i cut you some slack overall *3* ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- mike you had that wackass structure to work on dat bestline:You could type with your brain, and still not “show intelligence” Your rhymes have no-relevance, put a Caddy symbol on ‘em to flow-elegant ^^good but you did this: you went 2 2 3 2 2 your little "mini verses" had a diffrent amount of lines if you gonna do that faggot ass structure do it right overall *6* my vote clearly goes to mike 12 for harder punches and better flow v/mike |
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okay weak battle
ACE'S VERSE Ikeda sit down boi, Ace Diamond the new kid Its gonna get messy, so baby lemme get u a new bib ^^^wtf is this shit....filler line U choke and cough When I rhyme girls clothes be taken -off U suck at flowin thats why ur funds have been cuttin-off ^^^umm more fillers If I flow nicely,u must be rather bumpy Ur mom so fat I be callin her Humpty Dumpty ^^^first line filler second was a weak ass attempt at a punch.....played But she didnt sit on the wall, she fell right thru Then she had a screwed up baby, ahah and it was u ^^wtf where do you come up wit this shit....is it prewritten??? Ur the pussy that everyone talks about, cuz u still suckin on tits No need to cry over this... We know u cant make hits .... ^^umm not even a whole bar........you need to elevate i dont even need to keep goping becuase it just gets worse mike's verse Your like awful skaters I’ll have you crashed-into-these-“boards” I ain’t afraid to battle any emcee like I been-to-the-wars ^^bad opener needs work You’re new to this game like the Charlotte Bobcats Your wackness could have forced Run DMC to stop-rap ^^^weak You getting a win is as rare as flipping an “ace diamond” It’s time-then to see that you can’t rap even if you had rhyme-pen Take it easy on weak emcees like I faced kind-men ^^this was hard to read and a weak punch....okay try at a personal punch on first line You could type with your brain, and still not “show intelligence” Your rhymes have no-relevance, put a Caddy symbol on ‘em to flow-elegant ^^^haha funny punch.....good job You aren’t the number one diamond so please be-gone Cause the real ace diamond’s found somewhere under the ground of Sierra Leone…. ^^not a bad closing punch but you could still use some elevating v/mike becuase his verse was just better anyone can see dat......punches metas everything |
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Ace Diamond:
Flow: 6/10 Metas: 2/10 Multis: None/10 Word Play: 4/10 Overall: 3/10 Mike12Ikeda: Flow: 8/10 Metas: 6/10 Multis: 7/10 Wordplay 7/10 Overall: 7/10 Vote: Mike12Ikeda |
a yo good battle guys but ma vote goes to Mike12ikeda b/c he lead in punches, rhymes, structure, n flow (everything lolz)
a yo ace u did good but u need to elevate on everything n u'll b better good battle tho fellaz vote-Mike12Ikeda |
ummmm ace ur thang was filled wit fillers, um u could be great if u put in some punches... so u i had to go wit mike
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