When is love to little?
 

limited time and life's what is always confusing me
how can you call it love while you're abusing the
one you say you love so she calls me to cry biter?
i picture her face bruised and teared, why hit her?
do you feel bigger for taking your fists to my sister?
she saw mom struggle with these emotions once
and die, so why? i guess the love potions stunts
her mental growth and makes her forget everything
i mean i just don't see what her love slavery brings
he has you bid to his every whim or his anger grows
my finger slows as it keys cause the danger shows
soon he's gonna hurt you and i will let go and cry tidal
waves of tears for you as i drop another rose in my bible
you waken up to the world around is vital

...fin...

uppin

aight kid dat was aight towards da end it got boring but keep doin wat you do

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one you say you love so she calls me to cry biter?
i picture her face bruised and teared, why hit her?
do you feel bigger for taking your fists to my sister?
she saw mom struggle with these emotions once

thanks uppin

i really got into this one phat mic... seemes like a personal experience not sure tho...but it came together real good...from the structure to the perfect wordplay down to the deep emotion lots of thought in this verse nice stuff ~!1!~