Who want me
 

Im Runnin' From The Cops And The Niggaz Cant Find Me/ Ima Leave Them With A Broken Jaw Niggaz Lookin Like They Wifies/ All Yall Niggaz Is Bitchez/ Cause Yall Do Is Snitchin'/ Now Listen To Me For I Put A Sawoff In Yo Face/ Don't Say Sorry Pay Attention.....................................

Whack... I'd tell you what to improve on, but that would be everything...

listen kid u gotta work on ya rhymes ya multis ur flow ur wordplay and ya whole damn game....take a trip to tutorials to learn some of the basics iight..........

wack elevate n work on ya game but stay up

One Word: ELEVATE!!!!!!!!!!!!