Fourmost vs. Black Thief
 

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this battle aint even worth it....watch how my lines damage ya
this amateur is whack...tell me one nice mc whos from canada?
and there aint now way foremost can convince me
that his flow is better....Im a murder this Frenchy
dude is totally clueless that his best lines is useless
crack open his chest and use his ribs for toothpicks
hit ya where it counts....dude ya shit just not hot
couldn't be decent even if ya mother was raped by Tupac

Stretched My Bars So I Nev

Suckin Cock Of Asians So He Can Be Call'd Cock~Asian//Only Time He Got Hot Shit When He Pulls From Anal Invasions//1
Black Theif Stock Drops Unshockinly 'N' Ya Broke Like Ya Been Picked Pocket When Verbs Blazin//2

/Smack Dis Thug When Dodgin Punches 'n' Returen A CounterStrike/Look At Ya Cracka Mug 'n' Lose My Appetite/3
//Bring To Light Fatal Formulas 'n' Recite To Ya Dismight//Ignite Ya Mic Wit Dynamite Tha Only Way You Packin Heat Tonight/4
/Jagged Blades Slash Ya Guts To Test Ya Might/ ZigZag Cuts Splash From Ya Nuts 'n' Protest Ya Spit On Tha Mic/5

Stretch This Pussies Flaps, So It Looks Like Rookie Got A Scrotum Without Nuts In They Sacks/6
Sketch A Scribble Of This Cripple Cock Fightin Bookie,Like Clark Kent Tryin To Walk To Get Some Nookie//7
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this battle aint even worth it....watch how my lines damage ya
this amateur is whack...tell me one nice mc whos from canada?
and there aint now way foremost can convince me
that his flow is better....Im a murder this Frenchy
dude is totally clueless that his best lines is useless
crack open his chest and use his ribs for toothpicks
hit ya where it counts....dude ya shit just not hot
couldn't be decent even if ya mother was raped by Tupac
Or better yet if she swallowed my kids
ate all my jiz....nigga you know what it is
no contest hands down I straight murder ya
I stay on top of this nigga like he bedroom furniture

only explained votes please...if they not explained I will git em deleted aiight Fourmost?

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fourmost:
Your verse was cool but i wasn't feelin da fact that it was ALL punches and shit and NO kinda flow at all. Punches is good and yours was aight but I just wasn't feelin dat. And your verse wasa kinda hard for me to follow.
I rate dat like a 5 on a 10 scale.

Black Thief:
Your verse was krazy short. It had some nice wordplay I liked da way you freaked it. But as opposed to your opponents many many punches you had very few due to da fact that your verse was so short.
Hottest line:
"this battle ain't even worth it...watch how my lines damage ya/
this amateur is whack...tell me 1 nice mc who's from Canada"

All in all I felt your verse more because of da wordplay and flow you freaked and your structure. But make your joints a little longer.
Good shit yall.

vote=black thief
yall come thru and check this out
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...194#post1313194

multis-4
punches-4
personals-black
flow-4
creativity-4
wordplay-4
overall-4

this battle was hands down one by four cuz he had everything in accord but black da part about his moms wuz fire

v/four

this battle aint even worth it....watch how my lines damage ya
this amateur is whack...tell me one nice mc whos from canada?

^^^ my man LOC is from Canada and he's nice...jus ain't signed yet...but nigga will eb

and there aint now way foremost can convince me
that his flow is better....Im a murder this Frenchy

^^ good flow...but you need more complexity in the punches and set up
Rhyming is nice too..almost delectable...lol (like dat word huh)

hit ya where it counts....dude ya shit just not hot
couldn't be decent even if ya mother was raped by Tupac

^^ hmm...interesting...not sure Im feeling/getting the PAC line


25/40


Suckin Cock Of Asians So He Can Be Call'd Cock~Asian//Only Time He Got Hot Shit When He Pulls From Anal Invasions//1
Black Theif Stock Drops Unshockinly 'N' Ya Broke Like Ya Been Picked Pocket When Verbs Blazin//2


^^ Personally, I hate this style of rhyming becuse its FORCED...and the cock line was corny...UGH...u get props for creativity in the punch tho

/Smack Dis Thug When Dodgin Punches 'n' Returen A CounterStrike/Look At Ya Cracka Mug 'n' Lose My Appetite/3
//Bring To Light Fatal Formulas 'n' Recite To Ya Dismight//Ignite Ya Mic Wit Dynamite Tha Only Way You Packin Heat Tonight/4

^^ This rhymes...it flows...but it's FILLER...u cud use this against ANY EMCEE on this board...where as...Blacks verse is more aimed at u


Vote: BLACK..simple punches...but at least they were aimed directly at ur opponent

oh aiight and what I meant by the Pac line is...you know...even if he had Tupacs genes..he wouldnt be hot...

Aight the break down~
multis- 4
punches-4
personals-black
flow- tie
creativity- 4
wordplay-ummmhhh i think 4 got that one
overall-4

Why?
Aight... 4 did post some longer lines... than black did... fo real.. but since it doesnt say no streched lines in the rules/... ya cant do anything about it... Black ya came nicely with the flow nd personals.. but ya punches and multis were lackin dog.... try building those up~1~

multis-4 not many but i did notice one there you got to incorperate more if you wanna be good man
punches-4 just good nothing out standing this was a basic hes wack so it makes youlook bad battle
personals-4 black had no personals at all a very weak verse
flow-black thats the only thing i saw that was good from you
creativity-tie same shit i here all the time switch it up sometime
wordplay-4 had just a lil
overall-4

v/4