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Killah Bwoy 05-26-04 12:20 PM

NOT GETTIN LOCKED UP!(exlcusive Banga!! Must SEE)
 
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*MAN WALKING...hears killah comin so begins to walk faster*
Killah: what you runnin for nigga *starts runnin after Man*
*Shoots the man in the back and takes his wallet and necklaces and Runs*

*gun shots*
Police officer: Shots fired On 45 av. Requestin Back Up
Suspect Has been suverely shot in the spine
I Repeat ReqUESTING BACK-Up ASAP!

*Sirens*

Blood On My Clothes From The Nigga I Shot-
Hidin' In The Alley Hopin' I Don't Get Caught-
Left Hand Holdin My Nine Otha Holdin My Cock-
Stupid Nigga..Put the Gun Back In My Sock-
Got Me Runnin' Like Im In The 100 Meter Dash-
Opened His Wallet Amazed As I saw One Grand In Cash-
Took The Doe And Rapped It Around My blue Rag-
Knew I Couldn't Be Identified So I took Off My du-rag-
On Some James Bond Shit Runnin' Threw The Block-
Tripped And Fell Shocked As I Dropped My Glock-
"Fuck IT!", Left the gun And Ran For My Life-
Knowin If a Bitch Fucked With Me I Still Had My Knife-
Surprised As I heard My Gurl Call My Name-
She Let Me In..Leg hurtin..Tryin To Hold In The Pain-

Chorus (X2) :
No WHere To Run No Where To Hide-
I Can't Get Locked Up Its A Beautiful Day Outside-
Too Old For Games But Too Young To Die-
Damn I Knew I Shouldn't Of Killed That Guy-

All That Fuckin Runnin Got Me Tired And Shit-
Sit Back And Relax by the Fire N Shit-
All Of A Sudden Cops Busted The Fuckin Door Down-
Jumpin Over Furniture runnin For The back Door Now-
The 5-0 Asked My Gurl Where I Had Went-
She Said I Dunno What You Talkin Bout I Have No Boyfriend-
Dove Out The Window And Jumped Over The Backyard-
As Im Runnin I Have Visions Of Me Behind Bars-
My Homeboiz Laughin As They See Me Runnin Like Hell-
Gave Em' The Middle Finger And Continued To Run Like Hell-
Hid In My Niggaz House Hopin' I Didnt Get Caught-
6 Hours Passed..Knowin I Had Out Ran The Cops-

Chorus (X2) :
No WHere To Run No Where To Hide-
I Can't Get Locked Up Its A Beautiful Day Outside-
Too Old For Games But Too Young To Die-
Damn I Knew I Shouldn't Of Killed That Guy-

verse 3:
4 Months Have Passed Started A New Life In NY-
Lived With My Gurl My Older Sis And Some Other Guy-
The Memories Of What I Did Still Passes My Mind-
My Gurl Tells Me "cheer up everythings gonna be fine"-
Still In Shock knowin I Had Tooken Some Ones Life-
Hopefully in a couple years she could be my wife-
I heard sirens comin So I began To Laugh-
Knowin 4 Months Ago Tha Was Me Runnin..Saggy Pants-
All Of A Sudden The Door Busted Open..It was the Cops-
They Put My Hand behind My back I was confused was i caught?
Then I Jus Remembered One Thing............I Forgot...
they got my fingerprints when i dropped my glock.............-

Soul Sickness 05-26-04 12:59 PM

that was some pretty good shyt it was long but i was def likin it...nice spit..................................

Killah Bwoy 05-26-04 01:17 PM

thanx playa much respect !

Killah Bwoy 05-26-04 05:17 PM

yo can yall peep this

Killah Bwoy 05-27-04 08:41 AM

Peep The Sicknessss

Killah Bwoy 05-29-04 10:42 AM

uppin this shit..its pure heat

King Solo 05-30-04 11:05 AM

some gud shit killah

nice hook
nice verses

u had sum gud wordplay in there and the idea for the open mic was sick
yo playa, u shud put that on audio dawg!!

Killah Bwoy 05-30-04 11:33 AM

yo fam i will too ^ i gotta beat for it...once i get my soundcard imma be taking over the audio battles..and ive seen peoples shit on here..i can merk em all lmfao

Killah Bwoy 05-31-04 04:55 PM

everyones droppin feedback except on my shit and its one of the sickest WTF IS UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUCKAZ!!!!!!!!!

J Gutta 05-31-04 05:01 PM

nice drop home boi.....haha sounded like me runnin from po's but nigga i didnt drop da glock home boi...but ye nice flow home boi was feelin it Queenz holla back wun be ez

Killah Bwoy 05-31-04 05:04 PM

i feel you fam...keep doin you fo real patna........reppin NYC..holla at da bwoy..fo real

young beezy 05-31-04 05:13 PM

im feelin da drop cuz stay up

Killah Bwoy 05-31-04 05:15 PM

thanx gurl...do you

Killah Bwoy 06-01-04 06:56 AM

wake up kiddies...stop sleepin on me

HeXen 06-01-04 07:12 AM

unlike the rest i read the om..its pretty wack...first off the first line didnt rhyme..with sets a bad start....no multis...for a guy has been on here for a while u used basic rhyme scheeme...no petic techniques..and flow was wack coz the lines were WAY to short...all the lines need to be the same lenght to make at least a basic flow...structure was ok..overall i'd say it is vvvv basic..4/10..<<thats being generous...ALSO...stop fuckin sendin me pms askin me to drop votes.....dats herbish..if u wona win battles win them by ur skill not by D/R...Good day


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