.......Insandialect....VS.....beasttez2.......
 

3 Bars=6 Lines/
No Crew, Hate, D.r Votes/
1 Day To Respond After Verse Is Dropped/
I'll Spit After U Check In......if I Missed Something Add It Whne U Check In/

o yeah and i forgot the votes... the 1st perosn to get 5 votes wins

checkin in .........................................

IGHT 3 bars=6 lines........


Disrupt Ya Mind,The Punches i Spit Are Guaranteed To Crush Ya Spine/(1)
While Ur Skill Declines, Cuz U Verse "Lack Punch" Like "Sold Out Movie Lines"//(2)
This Win? Is Mine, So Stick To Gettin Molested By Ur Catholic Church Priest/(3)
Ur Skill=The Least, And When Did RB Allow in The Co-Star of "Beauty and The Beast"//(4)
My Stock..Rising Like Yeast,While Ur Still Clingin to Dreams and Left Hopin/(5)
But U Suck So Stay Mopin, b4 I Start Putting "Shells to Ya Head" And Make ya Really "Hear the Ocean"//(6)

blah keystyle...

uppin u have till 3:00pm tomorrow to post.........

i hane untill 3pm tomorrow i dont need that much time to post/
i spit fire,pilf ang grease u need that time to roast/
the beauty and the beast line was really real real simple/
leave bullets in ya face like facial features and pimples/
and u getting money like the bunny getting trix/
its only line 6 and im killin this bitch/

Uppinf For Votes Peeps......and Keep Em Explained So The Dont Get Dq'd

Although Insane had some played lines like the catholic priest line and the yeast rising shit he still came much harder then Beast. Beast had no punches, personals, multis, wordplay, creativity, or anything worthwhile really. 6 lines is a little to short for a battle in my opinion, but if you do battle wit 6, then there's no room for error, feel me? I thought Insane was better in every aspect. His multis really helped the flow and he had a couple creative and witty lines.

Vote/ Insane

ight yeah i feel ya in my punches and shyt but i didnt real feel this battle but ah well 1-0 me uppin for mor votes

Not dat great of a battle...

Flow-beast (lines weren't stretched like some of insanes)
Multis- Insane (dont think beast had any)
Punches- Insane (nothin eye brow raising in beasts verse at all)
Personals- Tie (none in either)
Wordplay- Insane (dat "shells in ur head" line had more wordplay than beast's whole verse)
Creativity/Complexity- Insane (beast was way too simple)
Overall vote- Insane

Both Cudd beeen better exspecially Beast

Insanes atleast had multis punches tho they were kinda played, he had a much more experienced verse.Beast Dunno Wut Ya Was thinkin not commin to battle wit punches and personals, no wordplay ya need to find some creativity or ya not goona do well, overall insane wins hands down

Both could been better exspecially Beast

Insanes atleast had multis punches tho they were kinda played, he had a much more experienced verse.Beast Dunno Wut Ya Was thinkin not commin to battle wit punches and personals, no wordplay ya need to find some creativity or ya not goona do well, overall insane wins hands down

v/ insane

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i agree with the others in that if you spit 6, you gotta come on strong.
Insane won this by a mile because beast didnt really put any style into this battle.
Insane had better punchlines, but that movie line didnt make any sense. its true you used some played lines, but beast still didnt bring any competion.
Vote-insane

beast
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

insane
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 7/10

v/ InSaNe

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