onimonapea vs. wrenegade-----Vote up!
 

10 lines
no groupie love
spit at same time and submit when ur done shitlicker :thefinger

let me know when its poppin ok
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126663
someone hit this up pleez i need votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...684#post1313684

what the fuck is this asshole doin//
steppin to the keyboard, STOP, ur already lose'n//

i'll call my man aillight,he'll show you the light//
you wont even get a chance to pick up the pen a write//

wrenegade, what the hell r u think'n//
tell your mom to leave me the hell alone, her ass is stink'n//

i know if you know what ur gettin in to//
i'll leave you wit a bitter beer face like ur name was mr. magoo//

im not even try'n and im beat'n you//
the worst is almost over ,cuz the rap is through//

first off dog you a fuckin wack pussy, you aint rockin-like-me/
i'll put shit on ya face like sloppy eaters with chocolate-ice-cream//
beatin this fuckin bitch is fun, ima give it another-pass/
but next time you battle me, get ya head out my mothers-ass//
you just make noises, hence the name onimonapea/
you couldt spit ill if you dropped a song-of-ghonnerea//..hahahahaha
get ya mothers dress off kid cuz ya mommas-gonna-see-ya/
im bombin-on-this-cheata, like if my mom had ex-lax//
you aint gotta agree with me, but i'll still snap ya head-back/ ...noddin head=agree
call me trojan on this mothafucka cuz i got tha best-(w)rap//


man you was supposed to let me know when you fuckin set it up bitch

i should explain some of that shit

that moms exlax line, he talkin bout how my moms ass stinkin like he got his head up there..so if she had exlax she'd drop a bomb on him

anything else let me know

uppin 4 oni

uppin

uppin again cuz i fuckin can so fuckin wut mwahhaha good battle and good luck

oni:
flow was decent....punches didnt really connect and a few of them sounded very noobish...no personals.....momma jokes are herbish.....work on finding personals and thinkin of punches to go along wit them

wren:
punches hit a lot harder.....flow was decent....structure was kinda fucked cuz most of your bars had two lines rhymin and one of them had 3 lines,try to keep it the same....u kinda reversed his punches with better ones...more creative and used a lil wordplay

vote: wrenegade.....i will drop links for u 2 return favor when i get them

no doubt pm me them and i will hit them up with fair votes

go fo wrenz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vote=wrenegade

He was just overall better.He had better punches.Onimonapea punches just wasn't effective enough.Pretty decent battle.But wrenegade got it,nice spit.

i give my vote to Onimonapea- he had better punches and his flow was smooher wrenegades not up to his standards

U both did ok, Oni watever was doing fine till the middle and the end, he fucked there, I lost interest as his lines got simpler. Wrenegade had a good flow, better punches, and good rymes. Again, U guys did ok, just need to do better.
V/ Wrenegade
P.s. If a rapper cant pronounce Ur name, he cant diss U right.LOL this nigga is smart and stupid at the same time.

I'm goin wit wrenegade on this. Even though yo structure was kinda fucked. Rhymes go in 2's or it don't sound right. You had a part in yo verse that was 3 lines. I was lookin for the fourth to make it right but i neva found it. Oni yo lyrics just wasn't enough. I'm not hatin though. Elevate. Vote - Wrenegade

P.S. - Return tha favor. Link in my sig.