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AirForceFred 05-26-04 05:29 PM

AirForceFred vs Jacket
 
Go ahead and spit your lyrics fam!
Ten lines
No crew votes
No hate votes

The floor is all yours

Jacket 05-26-04 05:48 PM

check this shit...
Yo I admire you for want’n to be all protecten the Country.
But the Airforce don’t want bitches that fight like Play Boy bunny’s.
And I bet you prolly seen some crazy shit with guns and knives
So I bet you’ll be surprised when my rhymes could take yo life.
And when your on guard Fred, I’ll be catchin you off duty.
Not because I’ll hit ya, I’ll catch ya fuckin a dudes booty.
Whats that thing they say? Don’t ask, don’t tell?
Well im about ta spread the word, so you betta run like Hell!
Dawg I got every fuckin weapon packed, strapped, and cocked.
So it don’t matter what you say, cuz you’re my target, and I got you Locked!

uppin fo votes..good luck to ya bro

AirForceFred 05-26-04 07:21 PM

Easy victory
 
I was tryin to get paid,tryin to make some money/
I grew up poor,didnt enjoy going to bed hungry/
Fred doesnt regret a damn thing, im proud im servin my country/
I got a six month old son, i cant sit around the house broke like humpty dumpty/
To but things bluntly you are a waste of my time/
Spend less time rhyming, more feedin your mind/
You're punchlines are flatter than Nicole Kidman's behind/
Before my military days i was puttin faggots like you in line/
Its a hobbie of mine, no actaully its a habbit/
Dude is softer than cotton, that's why he calls himself "jacket" :spit: /






Its a rap homie you should just surrender, wave the white flag, throw in the towel. This shit is mine.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AirForceFred 05-26-04 08:11 PM

Hey me and jacket need some votes in this motherfucka. Everyone take the time to hook us up

young beezy 05-26-04 08:19 PM

Jacket ya best line was "But the Airforce don’t want bitches that fight like Play Boy bunny’s."

AirForceFred ya best line was "Dude is softer than cotton, that's why he calls himself "jacket"

jacket ya verse was aight n ya flow was tight
airforce ya verse was aight as well but da beginning sounded more like a song ur writing than a battle but u picked it up in da end
this is a hard battle but imma have to vote for my boy jacket cause his verse was a straight up battle verse but bothof yall spit fire stay up
v/jacket

DaCROZofHB 05-27-04 12:07 AM

ya...airforce first half of ur battle was just sayin about ur life, and battles dont care about that shit, but u did have good flow and a good closer, big props to u.
my homie jacket spit that shit awesome that was a battle rap, what u need to use on this site, flows were both the same but punchlines go to jacket cuz he focused on them the whole battle.

Jacket 05-27-04 04:49 PM

uppin fo votes

AirForceFred 05-27-04 06:03 PM

Uppin, once again no crew votes and no hate votes :thumbup:

Jacket 05-28-04 12:31 AM

we need votes! da fava will be returned

Jacket 05-28-04 12:59 PM

uppin fa votes..da fava will be returned

You_aint_ready 05-28-04 02:39 PM

aight first both of ya flows was aight....but I was feelin Airforces verse a lil bit more..Jacket u had some old retired rhymes and that shit aint needed on this site so i dont know wut they talkin bout....Airfore i was feelin yo rhymes more but they right u was talkin bout yo life in the beginnin but then u switched it up and let him know who run it....Airforce your best line was:You're punchlines are flatter than Nicole Kidman's behind/
and Its a hobbie of mine, no actaully its a habbit/
Dude is softer than cotton, that's why he calls himself "jacket

i couldn't really pick out a best line for jacket...so my vote goes to Airfoce

AirForceFred 06-01-04 07:07 PM

Thanks for pointing out the hot spots of the rhyme fam. But once again we need votes, so people hook it up. Its very easy to vote! :thumbup:

HELLonEARTH 06-01-04 08:18 PM

Aiigth jacket ya had a few personnals but they were weak. Punches were weak. FLow and structure were alright. Booty line was ok
AirForce better punches. Nicole Kidman line had me rolling. Good structutre and flow. Mediocre punches but they all connected

Vote-AirForce

Return da favor-In ma sig

Jacket 06-01-04 09:57 PM

yo, lets get some HONEST votes! the fava WILL BE returned

AirForceFred 06-01-04 10:08 PM

Stop trying to con people into voting for you! And stop begging bitch, let the lyrics do the talking. Upp the shit is you want to, but do beg for votes fam! :nono:


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