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SuBZer0 05-26-04 05:48 PM

SuBZer0 vs. NastyEm
 
Min- 10 Lines
Max- 16 lines
no crew votes

NastyEm 05-26-04 05:50 PM

hmmmm... chin chek''''.
diz will be very interesting....awaitin ur post my friend

SuBZer0 05-26-04 07:02 PM

Fuck it im not really feeling this battle but i'll rip this bitch to pieces
I was looking for a battle but I didnt I would be battling one of
Eminems little nieces/ NastyEm I notice that you forgot the "C"
Homie your outta your league this is Major your just a minor nuisance
to me/ Its like Shaq against Lisa yo the bitch wont last Benz just to
get fucked up in a higher class/ You can to the math motherfucka i'm
a plus your a minus you can multiply all your skills but your your rhymes
are what divide the weak from the finest/ bow down to the king and
give respect to your royal highness/ Dont come with all that gangsta
shit homie cuz nobodys buying it!

NastyEm 05-26-04 07:36 PM

ok....


let me see


chin chek chin chek goooooo


*STRAIGHT TO DA POINT*


~minutes flash~,im ~rippin fags~, as i ~devour sum more~//
Ima "smash his little post" like "MUGSY BOGUES" posin as ~power foward~//
Im ~hood from bouroughs~ da ~M -16 spits~//
you spittin fresh? ~Sub -Zero?, Not even wit ~DENTYNE STICKS~// lol
I spit "domestic Violence in da booth" , so it turnz into a ~"Hell Home"~//
im sorry Mr. sub....your catchin your Next (L) LIKE a ~cell phone~//
like a "CONVICT IN A DAYCARE" , i aint a joke cuz"~I dont Play Kid~"//
your "subzero?", so its true your barz is wats "opposite ~of wat flame is~"//
im done wit dis bitch, so let da ~FIRE FOLD AND TOUCH YOUR MANZ~//
cuz ima let da "NINE" "BURN" LIKE A ~9 year old usher fan~// ( lol )


im done

roop 05-26-04 07:46 PM

Flow - Same, it ran somthly for both

Punches - Nasty Em kicked ass I like diz one, Ima "smash his little post" like "MUGSY BOGUES" posin as ~power foward~//

Personals - It was about equal here
Multies - Subzero this where Nasty owned u, u really need to include some multies in here

Vocab - Both of you need work on this

Originality - Some played lines, overall ok verses

Vote Nasty Em

young beezy 05-26-04 07:55 PM

SuBZer0- ya structure is a mess cus but ya best line is "I was looking for a battle but I didnt I would be battling one of Eminems little nieces" da other lines r not good

NastyEm- "you spittin fresh? ~Sub -Zero?, Not even wit ~DENTYNE STICKS" da rest was aight u came harder than sub

both of yall was spittin like u aint wanna battle lol
v/nasty

Young C. 05-26-04 08:51 PM

subzzero vs nastyem
 
NASTYEM you fukin ripped that kid up that little punk usin these fake meaningless lines, nice work wit that that was hot. sub zero- stop the rappin cause lik he said u was just opposite of flames boy. peace

Young C. 05-26-04 08:53 PM

holla at me if u wanna battle ill battle anyone . Young Cs the name

NastyEm 05-27-04 11:00 PM

supposed to be 3 to 0...post a vote on da poll homey

LusciousLeftfoot 05-27-04 11:12 PM

Complex/Creativity:- Nas
Wordplay:- Nas
Multis:- N/A
Personals:- Zero
Punches:- Nas
Flow:- Nas {thorough}

Overall:- NastyEm


good battle Zero ya need to break ya linez up a bit....and Nas ya shit wuz hella nicee but all over tha place with decorations this ain't christmas ya know...haha...but good battle non-theless....and don't listen to niggaz who say you need to up ya game cuz 9 outta 10 thay do to...jus add more shit like multis wordplay{for teext only} and open always with a killer punch it sets tha whole tone...........


..::choice cut::..
Im ~hood from bouroughs~ da ~M -16 spits~//
you spittin fresh? ~Sub -Zero?, Not even wit ~DENTYNE STICKS~//

kEtCh~22 05-28-04 11:30 AM

murdered
 
like a "CONVICT IN A DAYCARE" , i aint a joke cuz"~I dont Play Kid~"//
your "subzero?", so its true your barz is wats "opposite ~of wat flame is~"//

^^^nice name play..damn nasty fukin murdered this dude straight up....1

Restricted 05-29-04 11:45 AM

Aiyo..Check It...

Nasty Em Took This ONe..No Need For Explanation...Nasty Took This Battle From All Around Concepts.

Vote- Nasty Em

Nasty Come Try Out For Metaphorical Techniques...

Aiyo Change YA Rap Name Too"

~R~


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