young beezy V Blackmon
 

rules: check in when u get back on

10 lines max
no feeding
i'll spit first

aight im back i had to eat im CHECKIN IN

i dont know y i accepted to battle blackmon
cause everybody on dis site knows ya whackmon
ill take you apart and grind every single bone
u from portland oregon leave da fuckin hood alone
watch me rise flow smooth like silk
this cats young as hell, breath smell like breast milk
this battle is already as good as killed
this boy claims that he tight now we knopw he a virgin pussy
fuck tryna bite ill leave da venom of a killa bee
he's rapbattles wackest mc's LAST ENEMY

yo r u gone post or what u asked 4 da battle so lets go this aint a all day thang

Yo this is the man checkin in

SO what the fuck you talkin bout you a killa bee\\
when you know ill leave you hangin from a tree \\
litarally my skills kill for real but if you say you got about a mill\\
over the internets how you signed a record deal\\
Im flippin the bird while sippin on sprite surb \\
saw you the other day wearin a khaki thong standin on the curb\\
and to sag you got the nerve thinkin this is the learners edition\\
your forien ass is banned from rb put the keys in the ignition\\
If he say that he smoked out on chronic\\
He lyin tryin ta blame his lack of vocab cause he hooked on phonics\\

Bitch

this was an iigth battle but ima give it to beezy his shyt jus came harder to me but he almost lost it by losin the rhyme scheme in the end but yo both yall need to elevate.....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119302
can ya hit dat up wit a fair vote yo......

aight beezy u had some more punches than blackmon and i liked both ur flows the verses wereboth good but the punches is wat it came down to beezys jus made me feel like they were written right off hand for this battle so they seemed more hardcore

v/beezy

aight drop a honest vote on this battle id aprreciate it thanks pc
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127095

Opener: Draw
Punches: Young
Flow: Draw
Humor: Young
Structure: Black
Personals: Black
Finisher: Black
Overall Vote: Young Beezy 4....Blackmon 5....

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

did he really just call me a bitch over a battle on da internet
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Naw bro my family was trippin on the keypad my fault no hate

aight im a girl by da way look @ my sig uuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppin

Yo I'm not gonna lie and say I really felt either of you in this but Ill break it down the best I can....

young beezy... your first couple verses seemed to flow o.k, It was better than Blacmons but nothing special- your structure wasn't too great but it was better than blacmons -Barely... I think both of you came with very simple punchlines no wordplay really- The best verse in this battle kinda didn't exist it was more who was worse and i found blacmons verse to be the worse of the two so Ima give this battle to Young Beezy, but I think you both should check the tutorial section or talk to some of the kids in elevated and seek out some instruction if you wanna do well at this. Vote- Young.

aight beezy u had some more punches than blackmon and i liked both ur flows the verses wereboth good but the punches is wat it came down to beezys jus made me feel like they were written right off hand for this battle so they seemed more hardcore

v/beezy