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hurting inside
As i sit here and wonder what went wrong,
the feeling of pain is oh so strong, hurting inside wanted to break free, locking out all my family, who do i trust and what do i give, do i take my life or or continue to live with all the pain that i have inside and all that i try to hide I want the war to be over weither i lose or win i need the light before I do somthing crazy where everyone judges that as a sin. Do i hurt myself or do i rage again, afflict more pain or sit and think what could have been. :huh: |
That is a awesome poem.Out of all the poems that I read from amatures this one makes more since then any other poem that I read from someone who actually knew what they where talking about.
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I'm liking this alot, it's good for the writer to write stuff that other people are going through. Because the reader can try and look at the writers side, then look at his/her own side and try to relate... overall i was really into this... stayy thaa fuckk upp...
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Thanks just doing my thing
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Thats the second drop of yours I've heard. Both deep an dmoving. Very nice. Stick wit it.
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yo dat was good i tink you should of made it longer bu otha den dat it's good keep doin wat you do
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