Pro-Rican VS Traxik
 

10-12 lines
no crews
no feeding
no hate votes

Whats happenin then, Am I spittin first or are you gonna, Gonna have to be soon, gotta leave in a few.

Ok, I'm gonna spit now, cos I'm ready so here it is for you,

This bitch comes out with more crap than a Fat man's ass,
Tryin to make his rhyme smart, sat in the remedial class,
I serve you up like a waiter serves food,
You'll reply to this angry cos you'll be in a mood,
Knowin theres no way to step up more than this,
Your method of improving is drinkin veteran piss,
I'll rip you apart with this battle I'm spittin,
Try to throw a punch, Not one of them's hittin,
You lie to people in forums, sayin yous a street child,
Science book, Thick glasses, Your reputation : Mild,
Time to wrap this shit up, with one final punch,
Go beat a Dick you fuckin faggot ass-munch.

Much love to my people,

Traxik

Hey so what? u spittin yet Rican, i spit first cos i checked the thing and cudnt be bothered waitin, Let's see what u got then.

Traxik

aiight....Pro-Ricans verse
 

i got ya sweating like grease from oscar mayer/
my rymes shine more than his that its written in high lighta/
i"ll kanya'em and really put his ass thru the wire/
traxik is going to change his name to tragic when i bust this fire//
your cards are stacked like fullhouse decks on tables/
yo defeat will not only be legendary it will be a fable/
i anhilate yo kiddie rymes like a pedophilac raped you/
even if you sold yo soul to satan he still wouldnt do you label//
never stop going like duracell batteries/
i got ya shook like gothikca with halle B/
this aint battlin this is me spitting preparing for victory/
spit that 100 degree heat that makes fat kids lose calories//

uppin for votes people ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

This bitch comes out with more crap than a Fat man's ass,
Tryin to make his rhyme smart, sat in the remedial class,
^Alright Opener Yet Weak.. 6/10

You lie to people in forums, sayin yous a street child,
Science book, Thick glasses, Your reputation : Mild,
^Nice Punch

Time to wrap this shit up, with one final punch,
Go beat a Dick you fuckin faggot ass-munch.
^Weak Closer ...!! But Yet Better Than Any Of The Other Cat's Lines lol

Vote: Trax

ok battle but trax got thiz
You lie to people in forums, sayin yous a street child,
Science book, Thick glasses, Your reputation : Mild,
haha lol

uppin for vote :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

uppin for votes everybody, come on vote, I'm pissed:::::::::::::

traxik

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 7/10

pro

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10

v/ TraxiK

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

punches:pro
personals:traxic
creativity:pro
word play:traxic
structure:traxic

vote:traxic

Im gonna have to say pro took this battle idk why but i was feeling pro more then trax no hate vote or anything but i think she came harder in her punches maybe idk i like his or her style im not sure but who knows

this onegoes to trax for his well opener that came out an attacked his apponent.
and he gets my vote for his closure, and his personels.

trax gets this one with his crazy flow, and opener that came out very well, but his closure was little skippy but it will do for now.
and check out this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127439