Louis Vuittion \/s Fourmost
 

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We got 15 minutes to drop

Sorry Man, Thats Not Wut The Deal Wuz, I'll Hit That Shit When I Gots The, Time Right Now I Got Other Battles On Other Sites To Finish Up Cuz They Due Soon, I'll Drop ASAP

w/e nigga i'm done wiv the flow, couldn't think of nothin fuck it its trash

So mad wit structure U wish 2 b next 2 Louis Vuittion
Apocalyptically rip U wit text from the holy koran
You need god look at your heart use the word as a reference
Penetrate your energy from demons I suggest I rid of your presence
You hot? U had better stop with the phoney confessions
When your spit corney enough to you in my holy possession
I accumilate more 'tight lines' than porno shops so I'm takin this win
People so close together they cuttin just to see who fuckin U again

Im done spittin this garbage, drop ya shit by dawn

and dont eat off my shit, write ya own i know seen how yall niggas do

Ight Sorry It Took A While But Im Moving And Had To Finish Other Battles Up so im not gonna be online for a few days after this


Have This Rook Shook In A Split Heart Beat/ Hook Dis Crook's Clit Like A Cut Of Dark Meat/1
Slip Tooth~Picks For Ya Pussies Slit To Eat Be The Only Fish Sticks Ya Clit Can Heat//2

/Cleats Stample this Cunts Face/ My Feet Trample on Ya Pamper So My Steps Can Be Traced/3
//Collect This Win From Dis Calepto Cuz My Rhymes Of Sin To Hard To Digest Without Da Pepto//4

/Debt Owed Lets Go Ya Life/ Sent Six Feet Below Wit Only A Bread Knife/5
//Syphon Filter Ya Rhymes 'n' They Aint Tha Great/Snipin Out Of Kilter Lines Like Unprocessed Data Dates//6

/Ya Traits Only Make A iLL Flow When Ya Mate Masterbates And Gives Ya A Blow/7
//Ya Shudda Took Tha No Show Cuz Four Just Handed You Your Next K.O.//8

Explanation:
line 6 - Out Of Kilter = Out Of Order
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aight i'm glad u dropped like most of these niggas cuz when i was on as atticus these niggas kept lettin me write first then read my shit then rewrite they shit takin may as well been a hot ones 2 make sure they beat me. but let the voters come... uppin

uppin for votes....

dam this one was kind of hard to vote on for both of u came in with a great opener. But I have to go with fourmost. becuase his rhyming spoke to me more and his closure was alright. so I vote for fourmost.

but hey I will hit up on this if someone checks out this battle also.
http://community.rapbattles.com/poll.php

^^^that is actually inadequate information to arrive at a proper judgement.. disqualify this klucks klans man's vote...

Four
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 7/10

Louis
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

v/ Fourmost

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Fourmost i didn't like your verse all that much. your structure was horrible, aight punches and floe.Louis Vuittion i understood your verse more. you had better punches and a better structure. aight battle, return the fava

vote=Louis Vuittion