Off The Head... check my first key style [HERE]
 

Ha ha, ya'll ready, this to some bitch that be driving in his weak ass car, looking at me all tha time with his weak ass eyes.... bitch... ha ha check this

almost everyday, excpet for today, i seen your face but you was looking at a diferent place,
did my last diss, get to your ears? dowg u was probably dropping tears, i dont tend to bring your fear,
but dowg you have been beefing for multiple years, fuck with me n leave your car,
i'll get at you blaze up your closest peers, and fuck the driving gears out your engine,
now how much money can you say your spendin? ain't no advice i'm lendind,
but heres a tip, dowg stay the fuck off my dick, i'll send mutha fuckaz feeding to your shit like a blood sucking tick,
then your boys can ask, did you even know who you was fucking with it???
i'm a tell you now, dowg i come around, looking to pick up a pound, with a mc sound
of criminal voices that will track up to cd and spread around, dowg u aint hell bound,
you could never make it to the underground, fuck your bitch and your job, cause you'll never be rich,
why the hell you get me to sweat, and you not even moving on your threat,
dowg, shit like this i dont forget, mad cuz i'm making money, laughing at all your shit cuz like life the whole shit is funny,
get running, bail be gone soon, and i'll be at the corner way before noon, day by day,
waiting for a bitch to come n lick my big dick, shit i'm loosing it now,
i'm a stop this type, go home grab my mic, record some shit, n send it through the streets,
of ottawa, toronto, winnedpeg and this gutter that we living in,
dowg, don't cross a successful boss, that won't hesitate to have your whole style toss...

fuck you u lil bitch, ha ha, mc shit, free style shit, real shit, street shit, since day one dowg, i should of found a gun an shut that trap up...wait fo me...i know u see me,,, cuz u smiling an shit... fucks that, feed you to my hand dowg, get smacked...you'll be attacked...fuck who got ur back too....i'm out this bitch...peace biotcH!!!

horrible there was no rhymin and no multis weak flow and overall bad go to tutorials and learn the basics elevate kid...........

LOL AT YOU

i dont mean to beef wits ya, but i have probably been doing this shit a long time before you, n i dont need this sites tutorials. i have read many. I was trying someting, trying to mix styles, i am a succsessful writer, n thats not me saying that ive been TOLD. for u to say none of that ryhmed, maybe u should read it. i dont understand this site that much.... gimme some time.

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well u started off fine but ur rhymes fell off half way through..u should leran how to construct lines and bars...ur structure was horrible...try to throw in some multies..some better punches..u had some good direction no doubt..but work on ur complexity..*ONE*

SB

u got some balls to dis me when im jus givin u feed back life is ruff so u better be able to take gettin dissed kid elevate................