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Spittin~Fire* 05-27-04 04:08 PM

Spittin~Fire* Vs. Follow-Up
 
Rules:
10-15 lines
no d/r, crew votes, or hater votes

you spit first

reply within 10 mins

sorry i messed up the last time wasnt payin attention

ill be waitin to spit

Follow-Up 05-27-04 04:20 PM

yeah nigga lets go
ayo


I keep the steel so u can partake uzis
And u only talk gangsta when criticizin the scarface movie
Suspect, cause i keep the bird in the sheets
And u livin a B2K life cause u get served in the streets
Shells are envious so the shottis dangerous
the only thing u spray is mixed fruit body fragrance
Listen i shoot ya brains out thats my proclamation!!!
or we can take ya organs out like its operation
u niggas better sharpen up u no good players
or find three holes in u like u notebook paper
leave ya body parts in a lifeless pile
u a toothpaste nigga all u good for is priceless smiles
ya rhymes are lackin lyrical skill so im gettin tired
you like a dragon with a clogged up esophagus cause u not SPITTEN FIRE

ITS NOTHIN KID

Spittin~Fire* 05-27-04 04:36 PM

that aint shyt
 
U think u know me but u really dont
U think ull beat me but u really wont
The shit u juss sed to me really dont make sense
You buyin your rhymes that shyt is worth 10 cents
After the first to lines u know u shouldve juss quit
Cuz what u said to me really was a pile of shit
Now here comes my FOLLOW UP to ur rhymes
All u did was talk about shootin me, u juss wasted ur time
Nigga talkin about 3 holes in me but i already got more
2 nostrils 2 ears, nigga can u count that makes four
I heard from your "homies" that u like the dick
Like it in ur mouth so u can give it a lil lick
Your rhymes got as much flow as ur hoe in the bed
O shyt i forgot u liked the dick i guess ill put out my lyrical Fire
Im dun wit you, go up to hookers point, and say ur a hoe for Hire

Spittin~Fire* 05-27-04 04:50 PM

.............................................can We Get Some Votes Please

Follow-Up 05-27-04 05:25 PM

Can We Get Some Votes Please!!!!

Follow-Up 05-27-04 06:10 PM

Comon Vote

50hater_killer 05-27-04 07:24 PM

ok lets see this battle is really hard to vote on. but I have to give it to follow up becuase of the closure he had and that was some crazy shit but both had good flow and structure but he just beat him in closure. So my vote goes to follow up

Spittin~Fire* 05-27-04 08:12 PM

Can we get some more voted please......................

roop 05-27-04 08:33 PM

Flow-Follow Up took diz da other cat jus needss some work on it

Complexity-Nothin really special, nice world play by follow, like one bout nootebook paper

Punches-Follow up domitate once agian on diz one, spittin u had manly filler those lines were played before

Overall-Follow Up raised da bar and Spittin fire u didnt meet it

Vote Follow Up

Big Kountry 05-27-04 08:43 PM

um

spit- that was weak man period your vocabulary is bad man you need to work on that um punches were weak to man elevate

follow - you had personals and thats the only thing that won you this battle man thats it ok you need to work on punches but they ere ok man

v/ follow

return tha vote in my sig links

IllmaticStatic 05-27-04 08:51 PM

spit- pretty weak verse vocabulary is bad punches werent hittin hard at all
flow was pretty good but thats about it

follow up- you had personals and and punches that were both better than spit your punches hit harder and your personals were better basically you came harder

v/ follow up

IllmaticStatic 05-27-04 09:23 PM

return the favor heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126552

Big Kountry 05-27-04 09:25 PM

yo can i get the favor returned i am trying to get my battles closed so can anyone who reads this go vote on the kkkhate and tlite battles in my sig i will retrun the favor if you pm me with a link thanx you

Recluse 05-28-04 10:30 AM

follow up won this but good battle
vote follow up


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