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Spittin~Fire* Vs. Follow-Up
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10-15 lines no d/r, crew votes, or hater votes you spit first reply within 10 mins sorry i messed up the last time wasnt payin attention ill be waitin to spit |
yeah nigga lets go
ayo I keep the steel so u can partake uzis And u only talk gangsta when criticizin the scarface movie Suspect, cause i keep the bird in the sheets And u livin a B2K life cause u get served in the streets Shells are envious so the shottis dangerous the only thing u spray is mixed fruit body fragrance Listen i shoot ya brains out thats my proclamation!!! or we can take ya organs out like its operation u niggas better sharpen up u no good players or find three holes in u like u notebook paper leave ya body parts in a lifeless pile u a toothpaste nigga all u good for is priceless smiles ya rhymes are lackin lyrical skill so im gettin tired you like a dragon with a clogged up esophagus cause u not SPITTEN FIRE ITS NOTHIN KID |
that aint shyt
U think u know me but u really dont
U think ull beat me but u really wont The shit u juss sed to me really dont make sense You buyin your rhymes that shyt is worth 10 cents After the first to lines u know u shouldve juss quit Cuz what u said to me really was a pile of shit Now here comes my FOLLOW UP to ur rhymes All u did was talk about shootin me, u juss wasted ur time Nigga talkin about 3 holes in me but i already got more 2 nostrils 2 ears, nigga can u count that makes four I heard from your "homies" that u like the dick Like it in ur mouth so u can give it a lil lick Your rhymes got as much flow as ur hoe in the bed O shyt i forgot u liked the dick i guess ill put out my lyrical Fire Im dun wit you, go up to hookers point, and say ur a hoe for Hire |
.............................................can We Get Some Votes Please
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Can We Get Some Votes Please!!!!
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Comon Vote
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ok lets see this battle is really hard to vote on. but I have to give it to follow up becuase of the closure he had and that was some crazy shit but both had good flow and structure but he just beat him in closure. So my vote goes to follow up
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Can we get some more voted please......................
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Flow-Follow Up took diz da other cat jus needss some work on it
Complexity-Nothin really special, nice world play by follow, like one bout nootebook paper Punches-Follow up domitate once agian on diz one, spittin u had manly filler those lines were played before Overall-Follow Up raised da bar and Spittin fire u didnt meet it Vote Follow Up |
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spit- that was weak man period your vocabulary is bad man you need to work on that um punches were weak to man elevate follow - you had personals and thats the only thing that won you this battle man thats it ok you need to work on punches but they ere ok man v/ follow return tha vote in my sig links |
spit- pretty weak verse vocabulary is bad punches werent hittin hard at all
flow was pretty good but thats about it follow up- you had personals and and punches that were both better than spit your punches hit harder and your personals were better basically you came harder v/ follow up |
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yo can i get the favor returned i am trying to get my battles closed so can anyone who reads this go vote on the kkkhate and tlite battles in my sig i will retrun the favor if you pm me with a link thanx you
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follow up won this but good battle
vote follow up |
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