create vs. AK da illest
 

ok you spit first

10 lines only....

no hate votes
no d/r votes
no biting
no bull shit

you got 25 mins after check in to spit.

aye yo kid check in.......this is my check in..just waiting for oyu

AK da illest Rap Battlez Premiere...da illin' starts now
 

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aiyo, u gon diss me, don't even try dat
i walk into a store, see some bling, i aint even gotta buy that
u gonna rhyme tough, talkin how u be so buff
when really all u are is a chump, watchin niggaz on BET with handcuffs
I grab your bitches legz and begin to fuck her
its da biggest dick she ever had, well...besides last summer
datz when she fucked me for da very first time
she walked up to me and started flirtin, witout me even spittin a line
I'm enterin rap battles, its hot in herre, like nelly
When I walk by ya, I'll smack u like a pregnant bitch, and kick ya in da tummy

wtf fuck was this..kid you need lots of elevating......you said you were hot..oh well

kid im not goin to lie you killed me...i died from laughter//
see i got these sick verses...call me the ill bar crafter//
im going to help u out and say nelly dont rhyme with tummy//
fake ass mc, check your title your new to rb you fuckin dummy//
kid b4 u stepped up u should have took time 2 prewrite//
kid its either you cant freestyle or you jus learned to type//

sorry i gotto go..pce

aye yo can we get some votes..and i had to go so i didnt get time to finish

uppin for voters....i no this is a weak battle but who cares.....and i had to get off the computer so that is the reason

aiyo, u gon diss me, don't even try dat
i walk into a store, see some bling, i aint even gotta buy that
2...wtf!!! that aint even a punch!!
u gonna rhyme tough, talkin how u be so buff
when really all u are is a chump, watchin niggaz on BET with handcuffs
3...weak as fuck!!
I grab your bitches legz and begin to fuck her
its da biggest dick she ever had, well...besides last summer
3...wtf is this, another shit line!!
datz when she fucked me for da very first time
she walked up to me and started flirtin, witout me even spittin a line
4...probly ure best line and still so wack!!
I'm enterin rap battles, its hot in herre, like nelly
When I walk by ya, I'll smack u like a pregnant bitch, and kick ya in da tummy
3...fuckin weak closer!!!


kid im not goin to lie you killed me...i died from laughter//
see i got these sick verses...call me the ill bar crafter//
7...gud opener, liked the 1st line best!!
im going to help u out and say nelly dont rhyme with tummy//
fake ass mc, check your title your new to rb you fuckin dummy//
6...gud line i guess, pretty basic vocabs!!
kid b4 u stepped up u should have took time 2 prewrite//
kid its either you cant freestyle or you jus learned to type//
8...funny ass line, gud closer!!

POINTS TOTALS

newbie herb - 15/50
creaTivitie - 21/30

V/ - the herb!! yea rite...lmfao!! real vote is creaTivitie

was AK serious? Yo Ak I need some wins hit me up in bitch slapped so i can murder u 2
alright it's like this Ak had no punches vocab or metaphors nuffin' kid u should battle fine mind r something
creativitie didn't even try but he killed it with his slick punches n vocab that acually rhymed!
Creativitie's first line & finisher were the favorites.

vote- creativitie (obviously)

um now way

ak- man that was asorry show period man no punches nothing good to work off of man you are not a gangsta dont rap like one you need to go back to the drawing borads and create a new image cuz you got merked

cretive- no need man 6 lines did the trick

creative/ wins

return the vote- t-lite and D-r links are in my sig thanks

ak that was the gayest thing ive ever heard
creative beat u with only fuckin 6 lines
winner-creative

Well i think everyone knwos who won this battel creat he just killed you and he beat yuou wit a basic rhyme wow you need to elevate.....creat use some basic things all around and for ak u is s8 weak sry to tell you u need to really go into a dictionary and find some new words the abc word not working on here sry
Vote-creat