Lyrical_Flamez .VS. Follow-Up
 

you know the rules

Lets go lil nigga

Yo
I spit lyrical flamez, with furioius game
the tech will have u dead playin spiritual games
i put a X on ya spot have u literally bleedin
Bitch, yous a candidate, not a rapper, u argue for political reasons
i handle da glock, kid u might find three shootas
and i handle ya block like a pre-schoola(PRE_SCHOOLERS PLAY WITH BLOCKS)
yea im young but i aint signin all deals
still, i done been through more brain then a tylenol pill
chill, cause im from B-more with hollows at night
no problems with fights, have ya brains bubblin like a bottle of sprite
Lyrical flamez, u just spitten lyrical fuses
hearin u losers, and u only spit tough through ya computer

Holla at me
YOu doNE Whore

here's my drop...

bitch the only thing you can follow-up to is whack//
no one wants to fuck you even if you landed on crack//
fake thug you claim you be doing a lot of merking i don't agree//
you about to be merked & have nothing left no debris//
i'm the new cat on the block not to be fucked with//
you winning this is just another urban myth//
I'm kinda just like the killer know as Jason Voorhees//
you probably got a killer disease know as HIV//
the truth is to me bitch you can't follow-up//
it's like talking your last piss in a death cup//
can't understand verbal assault got your eyes going blood shot//
lil wannabe you couldn't be dope if you fell in pot//

there we both spit uppin 4 votes don't sleep on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lyrical Flames Came WACK


Fallow-Up came nice Bubblin like a Bottle of spirte i liked that wun


Break Down

lyrical_flamez

Flow 5/10
Rhymez 6/10
Punchez 5/10
Structure 4/10
20/40

Fallow-Up

Flow 7/10
Rhymez 7/10
Punchez 5/10
Structure 6/10
25/40

V/Fallow-Up

a yo dis is wut i thiink

breakdown

follow up

punches- 7/10
flow- 7/10
structure- 8/10
rhymes- 9/10
total-29/40

lyrical flamez

punches- 5/10
flow- 6/10
structure- 8/10
rhymes- 7/10
total- 24/40

good battle guys but ma vote goes to Follow Up as u can see cause he lead in punches,flow,rhymes, n he tied in structure

i think both of u need to punch with every line more often rather than setting them up, but here's how i saw this one
flow-follow
punches-follow
structure-even
wordplay and vocab-follow
vote=follow
overall i thought he just came harder in this one
hit this up with an honest vote plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126763

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126748 can som1 vote on thiz batt le 4 me

it was good battle, both had nice drops, fallow had harder punches and i liked his shit more. flamez ur stuff just didnt hit like is did, his lines came out stronger, and had a lot better structure.Good battle tho big ups.

v=fallow

Flow - Follow [it was aight]
Punches - Follow
Vocab - Follow
Structure - Draw
Wordplay - Follow

Overall Vote - Follow-Up

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