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LyRiKaL19 05-27-04 06:32 PM

LyRiKaL19 vs *Tay.G*SinCity*
 
wat up bro...
rules:
10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r

i have to take off for now but i will spit within 24 hours....let me know if u agree

LyRiKaL19 05-27-04 09:31 PM

I got the ak aimed at you (what you gone do)
One move click-click trigga your through/ (So FUCK YOU)
From texas to Atlanta and right back im a terrorist and ready to attack
Spreadin them rhymez like a gat…but fuck that Im lyrical19 I fuckin earned that

Im a made nigga and ure betty crocker so now whos the bitch??? (huh)
Lets see whos mix is thicker and lets see who runs away quiker

And im bout mine is you bout yours? Run into my jungle and get speared like a boar

Bring ya family into it let lyrical work his mirical and turn em whore
Fuckin ya momma till she screams “JON FUCK ME NO MORE”

Im about to finish then ya sista cums through…ohhh that bitch sucked YOU BLEW!

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-28-04 05:01 AM

Man, this aint even worth my time... Fuckkit...

I'll take it easy on you... 5 minute keystyle... NO LIE...

Ya skill's 'Fallin-Slow', & I 'Want-To-Know' what is this dude 'Talkin-Fo'?//
I'll toss your HEAD in a fuckkin RIVER so your 'THOUGHTS-Can-FLOW'//

Oh Brother! Lyrical has no skill, so he jus talks about 'My-Mother'?//
Dat's low! Coz holmes couldn't be "diverse" if he was MIXED wid 'NINE-COLORS'!//

Ya 'Shit-Is-Wackk', '4get-It-Blackk', u better off 'Quittin-Rap'//
I'll try to answer backk to dat 'Written-Crap' but all I can do is 'Sit-&-Laugh'!//

Dawg, u'll 'Never-Be-Best' as long as I'm 'Blessin-Da-Text'//
Coz ya SPITS couldn't create a STR8 LINE if you was a 'PREGNANCY-TEST'!//

Ya 'Brain-Is-Needless', Every phrase u layed jus 'Strays-From-Decent'//
Believe It, last time you was "up in a bitch" u was 'INCASED-IN-A-FETUS'!//

Brang on da KO...

Big Kountry 05-28-04 06:02 AM

wow

lyric - man i told you before your stutcher was wack looks like you didnt learn cuz it is still wack and you got no punches man none that was a wack ass verse man period ok

tg- man you had word play punches and peerosnals all the things making of a good attle work on strucher and you'll be able to merk some eleite cats man for real dude ok man

v tg

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-28-04 06:35 AM

WDF is up wid this site talkin bout structure all da time? Damn man, thanx for votin but shit, structure don't mean shit in battles... Out of all da sites I been to I never seen niggaz so obsessed wid some fuckkin structure, damn. Jus read da lyrics dude, dat's all dat matters...

.::N-Sight::. 05-28-04 11:30 AM

^^ simple...ur structure is boo boo

and it affects the flow and how you read it...for example...try reading this sentence


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of..........how

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not.............to................write



Difficult to read it clearly and smoothly...that's how it is reading your lines


PEACE

kEtCh~22 05-28-04 11:32 AM

tay straight got this...no match wit da wordplay...punches..

Ya 'Shit-Is-Wackk', '4get-It-Blackk', u better off 'Quittin-Rap'//
I'll try to answer backk to dat 'Written-Crap' but all I can do is 'Sit-&-Laugh'!//

oh..& multi's...clear victory..1

Aillight 05-28-04 11:43 AM

lmfao Tay G had the only punches n they were hot
I'm not really a structure fan myself but structure made no difference n this battle n-e-way it was like watchin Mike Tyson fight an infant, just a whole lot more entertainin(if u find Tyson vs a three year old entertainin u have a problem)

fuck it
vocab-Tay
Flow(rhymes behind rhymes)-Tay
Punches-Tay
This battle-Tay

vote-Tay G SinCity

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-28-04 01:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .::N-Sight::.
^^ simple...ur structure is boo boo

and it affects the flow and how you read it...for example...try reading this sentence


THis .............is
a
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,example
of..........how

.
.
.
not.............to................write



Difficult to read it clearly and smoothly...that's how it is reading your lines


PEACE


Stay off my threads, I don't give a fuckk about your opinions. You can suckk my blackk cockk... BTW I posted our battle on 2 other sites, and you got KOd on both... bitch...

BIGPAPPA76 05-28-04 01:14 PM

aight good battle by both of you but lyrikal had no punches and shitty structure, he had an ok flow but over all it stunk, no hate tho bro. Tay on the other hand came with it big time and layed the smack down. Tay had killer punches and killer flow. oh and i agree that with text battles structure dosent mean a whole hell of a lot. good battle guys but this one goes to TAY.

VOTE- TAY

NastyEm 05-28-04 01:17 PM

yo lyikal.....sorry man dat shit was trash...no punchez....nuttin homie..

fuck....Tay had punchez multiez and word play...muthafuckin landslide...

i hate explainin shit but peepz be bitchin


punch: tay
multie:tay
wordplay:tay
structure:tay
overall:tay

pleeze elevate lyircal


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