Mixtape vs edit
 

ruleZ:
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no:crew, d/r, hate, biting, or recycling
12 lines (+)

order:
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1. you check in
2. you drop
3. i drop
4. votes

Checkin in....I'll Drop Now..........................

Pardon me soldier, but you're just a thorn in a garden of hopefuls…
I'll stick your arm and your shoulder down the garbage disposal…
The carnage is total, a sort of irreversible slaughter…
While a surgical doctor tries to place your body back in vertical posture…
Just burned an imposter, tried rapping with a lexicon…
Now I'm shape shifting like square dancing in the pentagon…
Fuckin retard,Take a foot to your chin bone…
Its been known, the only thing you ever get down with is syndrome…
Man fuck your big headedness and extensive flare…
I'll slap you so fuckin hard your ego will be in intensive care…
This battle’s like bowling, and your team is outnumbered…
I’m debating whether to spare you or leave you in gutters…
Im takin this nigga in one and droppin like herbs…
Fuck the battle,just focus on your death,like a morgue photographer…
Even tho this kid is new, why are you on RapBattles…?
Cuz your verse’s sound like an 5 year old askin for a baby rattle…

Yo "Edit"...Where You at Man..Drop Ya Verse........

check

put mad grips on yor throat so you suficatin.
easily creatin mass frustration.
look at me, and its death you facin.
murder gives me such a sensation, i cant be explainin.
look at my sig, im already mix tapin.
my text are rapin straight hatred like satan.
its rainin pain and you aint praisin tha thangs that im sayin.
its scars that im makin, if you aint obeyin tha rules im portayin.
i got mixed vocals like clay aken, but its mixtape that im cravin.
its yor body fluid im save'rin, like hannibol i aint just playin.
tha crunch of yor skull that im fave'rin, savin half for refridgeratin.
keep yor blood in a place when, my food wont be age'in.
retail'in tha rest of tha body to kreagen, cuz its fresh parts that im tradin.
changin my mind to a repay him, with eternal shame to sustain in.
your played bars i deflate to tha pavement.
just like astro jumps do, when theyr invaded with all tha free agents.
its a gay kinda haven,with you as tha ring leader of this paly pin.
speakin of gay men, how bout those bi sexual asains.
iLL dishonor yor family's reputation.
havin yor ancetors contemplatin ther fate to be stated.
i got 99 sayins, but this bitch aint one im complainin.
if you havin problems with yor revalations, i cant imagine tha way you mix tapin.

aight...
 

aight, you both came in n did yo thang...but the way he mixed frustration n the other words was feelin the homeboi from harlem Mixtape, props to both tho..

Vote: Mixtape

Return the favor:... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126942

(revalations , cuz your verse was good but tha ending sucked)

damn these young kats is coming up>
structure: mix
word play:mix
personals:edit
flow:mix
punches:edit
creativity:edit

tied up>>>
fav line gos to:my text are rapin straight hatred like satan.
its rainin pain and you aint praisin tha thangs that im sayin.
^^^>edit, tyte

plus: edit is right> your endin was weak>

vote:EDIT >> holla back on one of my battles> look me up>

verses were decent, but i dont think they were har/ i vote edit, because his verse was overall fun to read, not just a bunch of words thrown around to sound intellegent/ sorry but if makes any sense, mixtape you tried to hard to be smart./

v/ edit

return the favor on one of my battes/sorry no link

uppin 4 votes

Uppin(1)....^^?? Okay...Anyways Vote People .....Leave A Link If Ya Want...

Opener: Mix
Punches: Mix
Wordplay: Mix
Flow: Mix
Personals: Edit
Creativity: Edit
Closer: Mix

Overall Vote: MixTape

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

wtf lol yall need to learn how to vote..mix merked the cat...edit your shit was good but mixtape killed you with the personals and vocabulary...nice shit mayn im feelin it fo real....mixtape your shit was hot...good vocab and personals but you need to throw some punches in there you feel me..but that was mad hot..keep doin you

vote: mixtape

damn..both had some sick ass vocab
opener:mix...edit i didnt really kno wut ur opener was
closer:edit....its one thing for mix to use a played line, but the shyt is also wack
punches:gotta go wit mix on this one...he was more consistent with harder hittin ones
flow:edit...his whole shyt was one nice multi..all the way
vote:mix..he had the hard hittin pnches..flow wasnt bad and had an all around better verse...edit had a nice vocab and flow...but doggy wasnt really sayin much..jus usin big words...
can yall return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126411