sorrow poetry
 

as i sit back watch times fly
wonder why life is so fast and how it goes by
most of us tryin to get saved
live the lords ways
to many lost in these trajik days
so i rest in peace let my dawgs corps lay
so much sorrow in a poet just so much to say
so i pray for peace hope im dead before my moms lays deseased
just for me to say the least
let me say more sorrowness im not tryin to preach
its like a rose grew from concrete most thugs try to rush get kids and moms in there sleep
things get steep and more and more deep
got so many things goin in me
and thses are words of sorrow poetry
slowly over lappin me most cant understand there no one there to comfort me
just let time tell things in life ull understand just wait and see once again these are words of my sorrow poetry

I'm feelin that poem u wrote... times are rough out here and ain't nobody here to help us out sometimes... sumtimes all we can do is pray. And even when we do pray sumtimes it seems like there is no answer. Keep ya head up dawg.

"so i pray for peace hope im dead before my moms lays deseased"
if u die b4 ya moms, she'll have more sorrow than u, thas worst for here.
...still loved the poem