my self hyping
 

this is how i rhyme similar when i hype myself out in the streets, is it any different than the battles in these forums?
need some feed back on this quick stuff

Yo.....Check it......

i apply logic, each rhyme more iller,hotter than an blonde chick
words intellectuallized, for more ooos when i bust this
i muffle, strangle my opponents, and make them suffocate
the asian magic make enemies choke, the concentrating evaporates
I get every cuz hangin on my words as if I was the pope
my awesome lyrical flow,confuses my opponent and have them mesmerized to choke
see homie, i wont need tactics to have cats lyrically blasted
so if clipse trys to step me, they'd lose to da fantastics(I've got clipse!)
I work out strategy, mathematically, accurately
I'm like a walking dictionary,use weird words and diss metaphorically
anyways, every battle i face I show affection
i show passion and aggression, for each and everyone of you cats still tryin to get the rhyming addiction!

patentinal
 

ya keep that shit up, its easy to dis some of these bitches thinkin they fuckin g's when you check the profile says they 13 and live wit mom an pa. You seem to know the world i know, that half these fuckers here will never know exist....Just through some names in front of those punches, and you got some bitches for lunches.. check some shit out tho i need some votes not trying to use your shit for plublisty but this is what type of 13 yr old bitches i b talkin bout...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126940

i wasnt feelin it at all man u need to do some extreme work on ya gam foreal it was pretty wak go to tutorials and try to learn some shyt iight keep elevatin........

thanks for the feedbacks, it's kinda exactly what i want to hear, lol, looks like it'll be even longer b4 i start battling.........

yea that shit aint bad, U wanna battle me? i aint all that great, ima still practice'n. Keep doin wut you do, aright peace!

Mafia Soldier
 

Hot shit!!!!I like all the big words goes well!!! Keep it goin n keep it flowin, muthafucka!!

yo sorry man, i wont start battling yet, my mid-year exam is coming up, i'd be hitting the books, most of the time i'm on the computer i'd be researchin, no hard feelings right? 2 tell u the truth, im still practisin too, i'd be lucky if i actually win any battles on this site, i can rap aight, but i'm just not good at mocking people.

anyway, now that i'm online anyway, could sumone plz tell me how does the battling stuff works? i could sure get to know the atomsphere......

nah dont let shyt keep u from battlen i mean i went 0-3 when i started and look now i earned alotta respect for elevatin and all that shyt so dont let nuttin hold u back kid...........