Mad Dog vs Fine Mind er Outsider
 

Aight if you dont remember the rules lemm remind ya
15-20 lines
No CREW (That means even if u vote against ur crew member)
No dickriding votes
No hate votes
Verses due whenever
Me to spit first
After this no contact must be made between us (whatever ur name is)

Gonna check in then??? coz this is my check in

im checking in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Final words...
 

I could wait forever for this mutha fucka but it says ima spit first so thats what ima do so without further a doo i present to you MAD DOG...

(Verse)
Aight im spittin another round and i said i wouldnt do this/
But u gonn get curled up mo than a flexible buddhist/

Sayin i bit lines name the rhymes quote the exact place and time/
He spit me a 5 line verse endin wit Satan, Triple, complex & Find and thought they rhymed?!?/

Bitch ma fucka u outta ur mind pumped to the eyeballs wit weed/
Lemme pump u up wit sumthin but its gonn make u do mo than bleed/

It'll merk ur wifee seed and so called g's believe me/
Lyrical ability aint hard so why you have so much difficulty???/

Rhymin words like me and we...damn i now see clearly/
U front me then back down askin for help only coz you fear me/


Stop crying faggot like DMX i aint respectin homos so stop tryin to grab my hand/


Well i've spittin now baby so quit shakin that rattle/

Try ur best strap up to a vest the only way u gettin met by the feds/
Is if u go into cardiac arrest u too scared ur death caused by the stress/

So R.I.P dawg nice to know ya but i hate you like i hate cider/ (eugh)
Coz u aint welcome on this site no more u are an outsider/

the big gay dog got some nerve to try out play outsider/
im gonna give dis fucker wat he diserves thats giving him white powder sniff diss/
you an't nothing your just a peice of shit, you just can't take defeat u worthless dick/
my words are slick, they stick and stain, they cause a reaction killing dis gay/
your insanely wack the mad dogs got rabies he needs to be put to rest/
take the lethal injection, thinking its a viagra giving you a minor errection/
my words hit harder den mike tyson, you'll get kncked out in the first round/
this pussys got nothing against me, you couldn't measure brain waves from me/
i'll melt you down like a furnace, leaving bones leaving you der to become a fossal/
i'll slay this dog easerly, all i got to do is stragle wid your own leash wrapping/
not only am i gonna destroy you, im gonna mentally and make sure i disable you/
where your punches at anyway, got so worried in dis battle you musta forgot/
you just gave me the codes for my lyrical distruction for the ultumate unlock/
i'll kill your whole famly, im a lyrical termanater erazing all your shit from a trace/
take you up into orbit and hit mars faster den a rocket and land up in outta space/
take the shit like a man, take your dads penis up da ass, and hope it'll never goes/

I can't vote. But, it's clear who won this. One guy's verse didn't even rhyme


Mad...be careful using the quotes though. I think ONE should be the limit for your verse because 2 or more can mess up the structure.

Why is every fucker using me in their lines.. first i got mike... and then this kid.. but this kid took his line like right from mike... just changed some words... NO creativitie.

Anyways here's how it goes down...

Mad Dog got this.. least he rhymes some lines... it wasn't horrible but i think some elevation is needed here...you had ok punches, and ok structure.

Outsider. i don't think u had any creativitie, I mean come on you spit a line that mike used yesterday.. especially when u got my name in it...

Remember ure name is Fine Mind... and I MERKED YOU....

Overall for a better spit, Mad Dog wins this...

Vote Dog...

Heres the proof...

Mike12Ikeda vs. GhostRida

Mike12Ikeda is what this “Tar Heel” is tripping-on
You couldn’t even beat WhitePowder cause you’d be sniffing-wrong

BAD WANNA-BE VERSE WITH SAME IDEA

im gonna give dis fucker wat he diserves thats giving him white powder sniff diss/

Least Mike Rhymed His Verse

ummmmm i SEE but anyways my vote goes to mad dog with neither having a good hit line I like mad dogs ending to it tho so I give my vote to mad dog.
and plz check this battle also plz.
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...hlight=kkkhater

At the end of the day Mad merked this prick, Uping some votes for my boi!!!