J-burna..... 1st Drop
 

just leave some feed if u read. lol

Verbally creepin into your minds like osmosis, u spazzed, actin like u got neurosis//
Makin y’all look again and double check my rhymes like “who~wrote~this?”//
Stunning y’all like electroly~sis, wat y’all want~with~this, lines delivered hot~an~crisp//
Punches connect just like I hit~with~fists, u mess~with~this, then we break~yo~hips//
Styles~I~flip, wicked multi’s demonstrated an~hit, shit, when u read this u better~sit//
Time~frames~split, if u aint feelin my rhymes, then obviously your mind~aint~fit//
Others lines~aint~shit, comin with the rawness that most y’all cant compete wit//
Doin big things, aint no discreet~clique, countin up our wins like mah~fuckin arithmetic//
My lines stay based upon intellect, it’s just like your high, coz I got the perfect~effect//
My words and your brains~connect, i keep my dialect~direct and flows correct//
Careful with the words I select, that’s right motherfuckers burna’s here, so u best respect//

it was iight but i wasnt feelin it to much u need to work on shortenin them lines and enhancin the word play keep elevatin iight.............

Nice multis... Flow was easy to follow... And be careful, most niggaz on this site bitch about structure and shit.

^^^^ true tay.. his flow was fire....FLAMES FLAMES FLAMES

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Yo It Was Nice Keep It Up Kid

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Eh.. decent