![]() |
Killah Bwoy Vs Limited Edition
aiight lets go
10 lines blind spit 1 hour to drop after check in no dick ridin crew votes or biting good luck no feeding |
A'ight you, checkin' in...one hour drop time? Coo...hey, weren' we supposed to battle in the crew leauge, but I didn't show up?
|
ya ^ ...lol aiiight lets go..checkin in...........
|
Yo...check it... Merkin' kids so bad it's murder...teach to kill I am one of those teachers You playin' basketaball and rappin'...but no 'gurlz' will notice hot features A'yo...you should put me as your avy...I am one of those 'Kings' You ain' a rapper...jus' a bitch on broadway in Ham-town...one who sings So much for a battle...this shit is over before it even begins This is another robbery...like when black thieves steal wins Quote:
Is it a crew or a phrase...which explains your 'metaphorical technuiqe' That's just the way the cookie crumbles...aka...your style's physiuqe You can take your 'gurlz'...go north and jump into Niagra Falls At the age of fourteen...you got some guts... ...for a kid who's just dropped his balls... |
Uhh...dawg you broke your own rule haha...it's been an hour....
|
I saw LE in the shady records buildin..suckin em's dick..slurpin and all-
recorded it and sent it to michael jackson..he said no more booty calls- OH YOU KOOL NOW..Runnin around in pink draws...breakin the laws- Hands Still Smells Like Em's Dick and you still havent washed ur paws?- Easily Merkin You....rip your head off your shoulders like sleepy hollow- Your either blind or retarted...cause these rules arent hard to follow- his raps look like a Gay Chat..like an anerexic chick..you far from phat- Kill This Kat..LE:you makin me horny..WHAT WAS THAT!!- Raps Get burnt to crisp...cut ya lips..stop tryin to whisp...- er..to me im not gay..like a gay porno movie..he loves this "clip"- lmfao and its ova |
A'ight w/e a lil' bit late...nive verse dawg. Let's get this shit crackin' for votes.
|
its around one....but thaz my fault my clock says 3:04...
|
this was a hott battle...i wasnt really feelin L.E 's verse tho it was good but it wasnt as hott as i usually see from you...punches were ok but they werent strong...the personal was weak...the structure i aint feelin i like killas style more than yours cuz it makes your verse seem dragged out when u space it like that...it was pretty consistent and i think your closer was pretty hott...the opener was good too but the whole middle was kinda wack.......killah i think you had a decent verse also not as hott as what u usually spit...punches were good...i think u talked about his affection towards em a lil too much...but still had some funny lines in there...your structure was better than L.E's and your multies and wordplay put this battle away...also the funniness of your battle gave it more of an edge than L.E's good verses from both
vote: killah bwoy ~!1!~ |
Limited Edition:
Punches were ok, played lines, u missed creativity man, i seen betta shit from you. am dissapointed actually, U could have used direct personals. Killah Bwoy: U also spit betta than this, also played lines, but creative i have to say. Umm still yo punches were forced some landed some didnt. U also could have dont betta. but nice shit u edged it wit betta punches. V/: Bwoy |
I thought this battle would have been a lot better
Breakdown for Limited.....that was a really weak verse, your punches were weak an played, only the line before your closer was a little good, your closer was seriously played, your personals were weak, your had good flow tho, an structure was good but those were the only pluses Breakdown for Killa.....that was one of the weakest verses I've seen from you, are you in a slump or something, it had like 2 solid punches an that was it, it was creative but weak no the less, you had a few attempted personals but not quite there, you had decent flow, an good structure, same as him those were the only pluses Killa gets my vote simply becuz Limited only had one punch an killa at least had two, so by a small margain, killa Vote: Killa Bwoy |
lol dawg im not gonna bring out naepalms and missles yet unless i need too you feel me..but koo vote uppin
|
limited u came mad played dawg u had good flow and structure but personals multis and vocab sould use work
ok killa ur gettin my vote ur flow wsa good vocab needs work but u had good flow personals and u had mad creative good verse dawg |
Killah-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really..... you had everything uncluding similies and metaphores..Balacnce was ok..... L.E.-Came aight....Work on something structure was The best but You came straight.....Close battle Limited ...But keep elevatin and work on alotof things v/Killah |
Sorry for the 2nd Post...Can ya return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126947
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:53 AM. |