[Vote]DaLyricalVillain vs. Follow-Up
 

18 line max
i'll spit first
dont feed off my verse
No biting
Freestyle
no d/r votes
no crew votes...

Enough wit the rules... Check in and ill drop

Follow-up = DGriff = DQ'ed

hurry up

fuck i been waitin for you to check in... here it is...

Follow Up is gay, thinkin he sick, tryin to forge me//
Cuz his styles hella pussy like a straight cliteral orgy//
The floor be, shakin yo foundation and you flakin'//
Like the crust of apple pie, you crumblin' and you breakin//
You're foldin' under my power like i threw a hook//
But i'm throwin lyrical punches still leavin this nigga shook//
To the core b, jus drop yo shit now cuz its mandatory//
Drop your shit, or jus bitch out either way i'll get the glory//
Fuck beatin arounf the bush, i'll drop my shit and make it personal//
ANd murder you and every fagot line you claimin in yo arsenal//
This aint partial, this is a full fledged lyrical murderin//
To you niggas who i eat like snacks in bitch slapped im jus orderin//(Orederin my meal)
My styles untouchable now, matter of fact call it intangible//
So if you dont respond to this i guess its understandible//
My flows is flammable, cuz i'll burn you i'm the cook//
Put this hoe cake in the oven, over cook this little rook//(Little rookie)

aight homey its on you...

C'mon my nigga.. drop yo shit, you takin hella years...

YO listen

This battle is just an experimentation,
Make plantations of young relations
THe guns replace u, my lyrics just cause an inflation of ya admiration
My lyrical dictation, and ya girl where my dick placin
Ya bitch accusations is just leaving and causing infactuation
Da Lyrical Villian?? ha im gettin promotion through ya conditioned emotions
Comon with all the comotion, if u wanna get better in rhyming the first step is to start with devotion
my shots making apparant motions, apparently its scarin u and these matters
still provokin
My message leads to presage, u uncertain but corrected
Im all about beef like delicatessens
yous a victim, a baby in the game when i wet u up u gone feel like u was christened
Im hearin da lyrical villian but i put fear in the buildin
This kid only watches villians and superheros, him and his crew histerical children

Its nothin
Vote niggas

Aight good battle homeys lets get some votes on this shit....1

Can we get some votes

Eventhough both of the rappers were good follow up had a better flow and switched the style of his rappin