matrix vrs lyricallyabbusiv
 

since i tryed to get you to drop i posted too much and it won't let me post i made another thread and now i have to write another verse cuz when i hit back it deleted my verse so i have to write another one so i'll drop soon just drop your verse over here drop a link or something or copy and paste it to this thread i'll drop soon

check...........

Ya first mistake was the fact that you quoted Em's lines//
But I dont blame you....I can see your raps are so shitty you gotta focus to bite rhymes//
"But Slim what if you win wouldnt that be weird"//
Fuck yeah it would, cause shady ya d/r's dont live here!//
Didn't bite kid prove it! rename em to lyricallyabbusiv cas like it he plays other peoples music//
Deal in 'Small Quantities', so they?re familiar with 'Your Chances//
They know you winnin is like Wheelchair-Bound white kids dancing//
Ima strangle lyricallyabbusiv with USB cables to stop from 'stealing music//
Uh Oh lyrically, Eminem hasnt came with anything new so I have a feeling you'll loose it//
TRIGGA first to be like Waren-G and regulate Smiles//
If you forgot what i think of you man head over to 8 Mile//
i'llLeave his verse dispersed like the Band of Brothers in cremated sand//
This kid couldn?t ?connect a punch? if my ?face was glued to his hand//
I?ll have 'Ya Missin' like seniors who 'Lost-their-Teeth//
Try AUDIO cause you ain?t no way ?Safe-wit-Keys//
Like 'Musical Chairs' I?ll make ya ass 'Take-a-Seat//'
Go 'head, step in this thread and come-get-smacked//.
You lookin' at 'submit reply' after your verse? A Bit of advice.....dont click that//

your turn just copy and paste your verse or drop a link


uppin for votes

its obvious that matrix won. he had more punch lines. lyric i was feelin u and all but trigga u killed that nigga.

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Trigga took this one better everything better structure, vocab, punches he takes this one
Can someone vote on ma battles??

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unexplained votes...and possible d/r's.............uppin 4 real votes....

uppin for this shit.......................

don't hate i'll do it again herb^

^nigggggggaaaaaaaaa....i didnt even try a bittttttt.....n i killledddd u.....dunno where ya fuken d/r's headin from nigga!

alright well since LA is in my crew on this name and Trigga is in my crew on Flash....this is a crew vote either way so it dont matter...........

flow-LA
closer-LA
opener-LA
punches-LA
personals-LA
structure-LA
creativity-TM
enjoyment-BOTH


LA's best lines

I told this kid that I was new, and the kid took the bait...
wanna b like pac?well guess watz in his death bed? ya fate*
His health is already at 0...culdnt kill this bitch anymore..
shit, i'd be dead too...if my rhymes were such a bore!
Breaken em in half...making the mods pick up the debris..

^^your shit was a good verse man.....
I like your shit on the other site better but i know you wasnt even really trynin in this battle.......you elevated alot and i know that.....your punches was hard and they stuck
your flow was good and your structure was even.......you dun good man keep elevatin


Trigga's best lines

.............................................not really sure

man i didnt really like your shit in this battle.......you really need to work on your structure because it was really weak and i had to read your shit like 3 times just to get the flow......you need to work on your punches aswell so that they hit alot harder like try rewording them and shit.....other then that shit is coo.....jus keep elevatin son

v/LA

Trigga's Verse:

Ya first mistake was the fact that you quoted Em's lines//
But I dont blame you....I can see your raps are so shitty you gotta focus to bite rhymes//
stretched..pretty good personal

"But Slim what if you win wouldnt that be weird"//
Fuck yeah it would, cause shady ya d/r's dont live here!//
haha not bad

Didn't bite kid prove it! rename em to lyricallyabbusiv cas like it he plays other peoples music//
umm wheres the follow up?

Deal in 'Small Quantities', so they?re familiar with 'Your Chances//
They know you winnin is like Wheelchair-Bound white kids dancing//
played out

Ima strangle lyricallyabbusiv with USB cables to stop from 'stealing music//
Uh Oh lyrically, Eminem hasnt came with anything new so I have a feeling you'll loose it//
not a bad set up but didnt deliver as hard as it could

TRIGGA first to be like Waren-G and regulate Smiles//
If you forgot what i think of you man head over to 8 Mile//
nope...

i'llLeave his verse dispersed like the Band of Brothers in cremated sand//
This kid couldn?t ?connect a punch? if my ?face was glued to his hand//
played concept

I?ll have 'Ya Missin' like seniors who 'Lost-their-Teeth//
Try AUDIO cause you ain?t no way ?Safe-wit-Keys//
Like 'Musical Chairs' I?ll make ya ass 'Take-a-Seat//'
u broke it down like it was a mutli but it didnt even rhyme..newbish

Go 'head, step in this thread and come-get-smacked//.
You lookin' at 'submit reply' after your verse? A Bit of advice.....dont click that//
didnt rhyme.......

umm punches were decent but your structure was fucked....sometimes u have 2 lines a bar,sometimes 1 or 3....there were lines that didnt rhyme...punches were your strong point but most still had played concepts

Lyrically's Verse:

I told this kid that I was new, and the kid took the bait...
wanna b like pac?well guess watz in his death bed? ya fate*
nice personal/punch setup

His health is already at 0...culdnt kill this bitch anymore..
shit, i'd be dead too...if my rhymes were such a bore!
nice personal,could have delivered harder

Breaken em in half...making the mods pick up the debris..
leave this bitch more confused...dan da letters in his avy!
haha,nice

Has $250, well now u can go n buy a ghost writer...
burn this kids face...just to make your head 'lighter'...
first line was sick,could have followed a lil harder

Matrix huh?!..den try n dodge da punches im throwing...
now take a 'shot' at me...no wait..ur 14...ur still growing..*
pretty good closer

Your punches were about the same as his but werent so played......structure and flow won this battle for you,cuz his was just fucked

v/ Lyrically

Opener: LA
Flow: LA
Personals: LA
Punches: Both
Structure: TM
Creativity: TM
Closer: LA

Overall Vote: lyricallyabbusiv

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2-3 uppin for votes

im winnin 3-0^.................uppin.......................... ...