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Read Between The Lines


Can I consider this extention in my profession a second blessing..
Cuz I cherish every excellent second that I spend in this session..
Because of my tension was set to be stressin' quick...
Can I rhyme freely or let 'em face the censorship..
Cuz it was like a remorse where my essence lived..
It's like I was set free and released by an exorcist..
And this enlightenment is constantly supplyin' me..
Like the economy, I was blessed with an efficient variety..
The purpose asserted to stress the message to society..
To partake in the odyssey that is the Main Event..
Excitement fufilled to the same extent..
Think not, check the smile in your facial sense..
The building where non-believers can make amends..
To blaze the set and endulge in life's gift..
The experience is like seein' heaven through your eyelids..

Nice..i felt tthe emosions runnin...i feel u cld sharpen up on the vocab..but all good...
8/10

Keep it up...can u drop sum feeback on my OM..Fellings Part 3

nice.had some sortof fellin 8.5/10

Thanks.

Apreciate it.