BATTLE: mC RIOT vs. Nyce1
 

simple house rules:
10-15 lines
no bullshit
no bitin
be done in like 30 mins homez

Checking In Up in this peace I'll spit in a minute

hah u takin so long...hopefully it reflects in da votin
come on chump

god damn
 

NO FEEDIN OF MY ISH...that my only rule
 

Even though there’s no challenge, I’ll call this 1 on 1
Because that will be your new record, after I’ve won (peep his record)
I see you’re from Motor City well that’s a fuckin RIOT
No wonder you can’t afFORD to make ya skillz compliant
Me against you, is like Ron Jeremy vs. a virgin, I’m makin you sweat
You can’t handle the pressure b/c you’re mezmorized by my depth (think about it)
I’m like GaraunSHEED Wallace garauntee'n the win of game 2 (from Detroit Pistons)
“You will not win your second battle”… no matter what you do
yo, I finally figured out why your weak name is riot
cuz you steal all your material, then claim you write it
You can’t see me in a war, got as much heart as an army commanda
You shook by the “front lines”, got to be “bitched slapped” just to enta (enter)

I posted my verse before 30 minutes were up chickin head

shit bitch
 

aiyo, i finally figured out why it took u so long to spit
You were in da bathroom readin, takin a shit...get off Webster's dick
Your rhymes dont even make sense, you put 'em all in captions
Get da balls off your chin, and also stop da scratchin
yeah I'm from da D, walkin down da streets and u see me
Pick up a book and read, you lil bitch...nice is spelled N.I.C.E.
I know you made da time limit, but while we waitin', we all gettin older
Yo man, I'll run you over in COLORADO, like i was BOULDER
I'll give u some tips, COMMANDA and ENTA dont rhyme, u lil shook bitch
I'll slice off your lips while u rappin cuz I dont wanna hear a bit hook dats shit
Yousa chump, your rhymes is like a fly swatter...they all WACK
You might of been wit JILL on a HILL but you still ain't JACK

This cat looses points for feeding off my verse which I told him about

Thats yo only chance of puttin somethin together that makes sense anyways you sucka mc

4 -12 lines can't even be considered you chump....if we take out all your feedin lines you don't even have enough to meet the 10 line requirement....you might get a DQ

hmmm aight i wasnt aware of your rules about dissin your verse...what kinda battle is that anyway? thats da point in battlin....and also i said 10-15, so go suck a dick

both of these was yawn-some, but the 2nd was slight ( just slightly) better.
both structures was a little basic and I could see where you were going withmost of the rhyme schemes. you should try 2 be a little more deceptive and intelligent so punches are a little more unexpected, that would work best. variate both flows.

Now vgote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126491

aight this battle was really close and it was really good nyce im votin for u cause ur punches jus were a little bit better and both of ur flows were good. this was a hard battle to vote on but i gota vote for nyce

drop a honest vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127095

v/nyce

Opner: Draw
Punches: Draw
Humor: Draw
Flow: Nyce
Structure: MC
Personals: Nyce
Multis: MC
Metas: Nyce
Closer: MC
Overall Vote: TiE....but imma have to go wit..MC Riot cause Nyce 1'z last line didn't rhyme that well...

Yall keep sleepin on this verse...first of all I could have easily wrote "commander" to rhyme with "enter" but I wrote it "commanda" and "enta" b/c thats how you would say it if you were spittin it...